Poem -
" LOST "
Nowhere within a circle
I'm atop a melting iceberg
Walking a forgotten trail
And I'm uttering a forgotten word
Lost,
Oh, I'm struggling...
Talking with no one there
Listening to the empty voices
Sitting in a forsaken chair
Oh, I'm slipping, I'm slipping away
And all my fears have come to play...
Loving, in a hateful world
Singing, to the empty rows
Taking, but only from myself
And I'm crying over irrelevant sorrows
I'm lost, I've lost my lonesome way
Lost in the words that remind me
Of long gone days...
Nowhere within a circle
I'm atop a melting iceberg
And I'm uttering that lonely word
Lost,
Where all my fears,
Have come to haunt me...
Tony Taylor. (Chicago)
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Comments
Took me to another world with this one, often times I feel the same way. I agree with much of what is said here as well as the feelings that are associated. "Oh, I'm slipping, I'm slipping away
And all my fears have come to play..." <--- Pure gold
Always nice to read your work
CO
Hey Thanx Curious Onlooker!!.........I know the feeling my friend...... taken to another world I mean.........I appreciate the time you took with this !!.............Love and Rockets!!...........T xo
Hello Tony...
On top of a melting iceberg Lost...
Hold on my friend help is on the way...
HELP!
Great write my friend...
Thank you for sharing...
Hugz...
Feathers
Thanx for the rescue FEATHERS!! (smiles).........I think you'll need a speed boat......... the ice is melting fast............. love your comments G!!...........you're the best!!........... Love and Rockets!!.........T xo
A place where nobody has a choice to be but inevitably will be one day, how to cope is the minds response - great write Tony
Hey Mark!!....... you're absolutely right......... excellent comment bro............thanx for this!!........... Love and Rockets!!...........T xo
A great write T` as we`ve all been there at one time or another and you express that very well in this. I`m a bit like that at the moment, life can be a b****! sometimes!!! I like the last verse!! You know that I`m always here for you though don`t you sweety?! I still love you to pieces honey.
G xx
Yay Thanx GEORGIE!!........ We keep missing each other..... we need to get that phone call together........thanx so much for this sweetheart........... talk soon...........T xo