Poem -

Love

What's wrong with you, with us, 
what's happening to us? 
Ah our love is a harsh cord 
that binds us wounding us 
and if we want 
to leave our wound, 
to separate, 
it makes a new knot for us and condemns us 
to drain our blood and burn together. 

What's wrong with you? I look at you 
and I find nothing in you but two eyes 
like all eyes, a mouth 
lost among a thousand mouths that I have kissed, more beautiful, 
a body just like those that have slipped 
beneath my body without leaving any memory. 

And how empty you went through the world 
like a wheat-colored jar 
without air, without sound, without substance! 
I vainly sought in you 
depth for my arms 
that dig, without cease, beneath the earth: 
beneath your skin, beneath your eyes, 
nothing, 
beneath your double breast scarcely 
raised 
a current of crystalline order 
that does not know why it flows singing. 
Why, why, why, 
my love, why?

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India Morrow

Being in love is the best feeling in the universe...love to express it 

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Lizanne Matthysen

I do agree, i am just trying this for the first time before entering more... ?

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Tony Taylor

Wow LIZANNE!!.......this is a VERY powerful debut' piece..... speaking and questioning the depths of love so poetically..... as though the author were delivering a Shakespearean soliloquy aloud....... the words crying out in a VERY moving sorrow...... seemingly lost as to WHY?......I found this to be VERY moving and TRULY poetic ~ in the classical sense!!.... the kind of write that is rare...... and most importantly...... filled with the creative juices of BRILLIANCE!!......ALL STARS!! & PINNED!!...... well conceived..... and.....AMAZINGLY well delivered!!.......I am an instant fan dear poet sister..... and I NEVER say that to any new poets here!!..... can't wait to read your next write!!......I am your newest cyber-friend and admirer!!........T xo ?✴❤??????

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