Love

What's wrong with you, with us,
what's happening to us?
Ah our love is a harsh cord
that binds us wounding us
and if we want
to leave our wound,
to separate,
it makes a new knot for us and condemns us
to drain our blood and burn together.
What's wrong with you? I look at you
and I find nothing in you but two eyes
like all eyes, a mouth
lost among a thousand mouths that I have kissed, more beautiful,
a body just like those that have slipped
beneath my body without leaving any memory.
And how empty you went through the world
like a wheat-colored jar
without air, without sound, without substance!
I vainly sought in you
depth for my arms
that dig, without cease, beneath the earth:
beneath your skin, beneath your eyes,
nothing,
beneath your double breast scarcely
raised
a current of crystalline order
that does not know why it flows singing.
Why, why, why,
my love, why?

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Comments
Being in love is the best feeling in the universe...love to express it
I do agree, i am just trying this for the first time before entering more... ?
Wow LIZANNE!!.......this is a VERY powerful debut' piece..... speaking and questioning the depths of love so poetically..... as though the author were delivering a Shakespearean soliloquy aloud....... the words crying out in a VERY moving sorrow...... seemingly lost as to WHY?......I found this to be VERY moving and TRULY poetic ~ in the classical sense!!.... the kind of write that is rare...... and most importantly...... filled with the creative juices of BRILLIANCE!!......ALL STARS!! & PINNED!!...... well conceived..... and.....AMAZINGLY well delivered!!.......I am an instant fan dear poet sister..... and I NEVER say that to any new poets here!!..... can't wait to read your next write!!......I am your newest cyber-friend and admirer!!........T xo ?✴❤??????
Thank you T. Much appreciated... ?