"LOVE"

Piusha Singh,

Great write, A poem can be a single word, or even a sentence, a paragraph, a page, a book, it is endless like a river reaching its destiny into the deep oceans. A poem can be a " bustling cloud " or  sculpted it to dismantle in love ", well depicted through your lines.

My applause, My love, My nomination

Bustling in a castle on a cloud ,

Sculpted  it to dismantle in love.

Unbounded affection pulsating,

awaiting to submerge in the eyes.

Love

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

Piusha,

Love is caring on someone else happiness from a different person without wanting anything in return. Unconditional or non-agreement love.It’s also genuine Love when other people care about our happiness unreservedly. With Real Love, people are not disappointed or annoyed when we make our foolish mistakes, when we don’t do what they want, or even when we inconvenience them personally. Real Love is unconditional.

When I use the word happiness, I do not mean the brief and superficial pleasure that comes from money, sex, power, or the conditional approval we earn from others when we behave as they want. Nor do I mean the temporary feeling of satisfaction we experience in the absence of immediate conflict or disaster. Real happiness is not the feeling we get from being entertained or making people do what we want. Real happiness is a profound and lasting sense of peace and fulfillment that deeply satisfies and enlarges the soul. It doesn’t go away when circumstances are difficult. It survives and even grows during hardship and struggle. True happiness is our entire reason to live, and it can only be obtained as we find Real Love and share it with others.

With true and real love, nothing else matters; without it, nothing else is adequate.

With Love and regards

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

Love is all.... it gives all... some times it takes all...love is hope..love is life. beautiful writing Piusha...

the following lines stood out for me:

"Ineffable adulation nurtured deep ,

living in your memories a pleasure."

"Escalating sublime poetic wishes

transforming me into a radiance."

"Loam shifted under the feet , diving

into the depths of hidden treasures ,

in the company of this known mystery."

And the following ends the poem fabulously:

"Not a tale of one night,a day or a life.

An ally amidst the detractors invoking rays

of hopes in foe,ever a  favorite game of cards

among the deuce,with a ripple of happiness

or a leech of blue,waning in an endless reverie."

Beautiful write Piusha, Nomination well deserved my friend ;)

Piusha,

My congrats on your winning nomination of your poem " Love " which has a in depth meaning, and  also echos even after the horizon and your  blue sky.

Love

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

An unconditional love..!! So beautifully written..Really love is like this..And that is why nothing should be expected in love..It can give us anything..:)
Well deserved nom sweetiee..*5 from your friend..!
Love always
Surabhi

This is a beautiful write piusha,
Maddison

lovely write congrats x

This is a really beautiful piece sweety, it`s well written and well thought through. Well done on a lovely piece of writing. Love G xx