Love Gone Bad (The completed song)
I hope you enjoy listening to the finished song and video!!!!
V2
One night she came to town.
She had an angel's face.
She looked like heaven's grace.
She turned every head around.
It wasn't long, she caught my man's eye.
He gave into her spell.
But the fool couldn't tell.
She was the devil in disguise.
Chorus
I don't want him back, the love's gone bad.
He should have held on to what we had.
For a night with darkness he burned our every bridge, road and path.
And made our good love turn to love gone bad.
V2
He swore he found his destiny.
But he was just a prize to claim.
A pawn in her game.
And when she left town it was plain to see.
She just likes to break the bond.
Between a woman and a man.
And now he finally understands.
But it's to late, I'm long gone.
repeat Chorus
I don't want him back, the love's gone bad.
He should have held on to what we had.
For a night with darkness he burned our every bridge, road and path.
And made our good love turn to love gone bad.
Bridge
Yeah she was an angel, but not of the light.
She turned our love into dust in just one night.
Our happy ending ended up sad.
And our true love turned to love gone bad.
Repeat chorus
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Comments
I hope you like the completed song.
Wow Rachel it is fantastic
Maddison
Thank you so much madison a lot of hard work went in to this song I rewrote it 12 times before it came out right thank you for listening to it.
It is highly appreciating. Along-with enjoying well the song we also hear pine of a woman's heart with rising sinful activities of certain people. Noe-a days, it is difficult to recognize difference between angel and devil just only by the appearance.
Regards,
Ravindra Kumar
Thank you ravindra I worked very hard on this song. Thank you for listening to it and letting me no what you think your input means the world to me god bless you.
Hi Rachel,
Lovely song and well written.
Although beauty is to be appreciated, for its frequency is what connects us to creation, it is also often that beauty comes dressed in many forms to fool the wisest of people, for with all we find beautiful comes a certain distraction in disguise that will finally burn down all we have loved and worked for.
Regards
Shirley Pourbaba
yep your right couldn't of said that better. Except for this happens more than you think to alot of people. I like to write songs about real life situations to reach and identify with other's . Thank you for your kind word's and for taking time to listen to the song. your in put mean's the world to me.
Great job Rachel
Thank you so much rob your very sweet and kind!!!
Rachel Sarai,
Congrats on your success and winning of your poem as third place in May Contest.
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Thank you so much william I wasn't expecting to win I just wanted to share the finished song with
my friend's here at cosmo funnel. I put a lot of work into the song and was proud of of how it turned out.
I've been working a lot on writing song's and lyric's lately. I'm trying to finish all the lyric's I have shared in the past here at cosmo. I love writing lyrics I have lyric's that need to be tweeked with.
I'm working on until kingdom comes this week rewriting lyric putting to music.I will share here first with all my friend's at cosmo funnel. I hope to finish a whole album by end of year.I want to finish my old lyric's first and song's before I post my new lyric's and song's But once again thank's for you kind word's
God bless You William!!!!
Well done!!! ((hugs)))
Congratulations,..On winning the prize.
Regards,
Ravindra Kumar
Great i loved this!!!
Thank you so much I'm glad you liked the song God Bless