Poem -
Love is deep.
Love is deep she perceived, the ocean full of memories sighed
She kept her feet so close to himÂ
down by the woven tide
He called the waves and the evening light
And brought the moon
Down to the shore
And there was where she found his reflection
And loved himÂ
even more
The sea had caught their lonely gaze with hearts of fire a loveing blaze
She dared not touch the water beneath that starlight sky
For love would surely disparate
And the flame burn wet to dry
Such a love distinguishedÂ
would cause a tearful cry
And she had foundÂ
A heaven withinÂ
his gazing eye.
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Beautiful rhyme scheme. I enjoyed reading this poem very much. Wow. I often have trouble with creating sound in my poems. You did a wonderful job here.Â
Favorite stanza:Â
And there was where she found his reflection
And loved himÂ
even more
Powerful ending:Â
And she had foundÂ
A heaven withinÂ
his gazing eye.
Good job!
Thank you sweetheart ❤️
I returned to read it again. Enjoyable the second time around. Good work. I cannot wait to read more of your work. I'm slowly making my way through the list of new poems to critique. There are thousands of poems on this one site. I may never catch up! I feel so blessed to have found this website. Thanks for sharing your poem.Â