Poem -
Love me
A sort of feeling
Love me
for all of the reasons right
Love me
Like you wanna eat me
Love me
For all of excuses known
Love me
Like you need to breathe me
just love me, love me, love me
Love me uuuuuh
Just hold me hold me hold me
Hold me uhhhh
Come love me
Knowing you never leave me
Love me
like I'm the greatest treasure
Come love me
With confidence I bear your heir
Love me
Like I'm your healing balm
Just love me love me love me
Love me uuuhhh
Just trust me trust me trust me
Trust me uhhhhh
Just love me
Just need me
Just hold me
Just breathe me
Just kiss me
Just s*x me
Come love me
Come love me
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Comments
I listen to all the old Rock songs all of the time. This is a lot like that. Nice One. 💕
Love Rock too... Daddy got us addicted to music... And it gifted us with creativity. Glad you. Cheers.
I always tend to get fixated on certain elements of a poem. Here it is your subtitle - a sort of feeling. Hmmm why not just a feeling, why a sort of feeling. It implies an uncertainty. Also why the inversions? Reasons right and excuses known. And these mixed in with like you wanna eat me and need to breathe me.
I like the repeated chorus. I want to write a decent comment on your poem but I find it written almost by two personalities within the same person, the second verse being far "gentler" than the first. Sorry.
Love is many things... Can inspire... Can do both good and bad but never intentionally to hurt... Can be jealous...enticing... God is love for me...so I get Bernie lol. Cheers.