Love Is The Strongest
Hardships takes the right leadership to make it
As I break ..
Just a part of myself to share to the world
Being a person that will be remembered for being caring
And most of all daring
To share that side that barely anyone cares to share
As much love in everyones hearts
it seems this world would be better than worst .... but it's not!
I fight for whats right; and if I die tonight.....?
At least I know I shared my feelings
And what I got to bring to the table
So, I will give you a light to follow
A hope to chase
A feeling your heart will embrace
My loving words will start a revolution
A solution
To problems that tend to be created by the ones that hate
But love doesn't discriminate
it eliminates
All feelings of giving up
The weak becomes the strength
And that's why love is the strongest emotion to create
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Keith I liked this poem. It flowed off the tongue in places, the only difficulty I had was to know just when some of the lines started and when they ended. I think if you structured it slightly differently, so as to show complete lines, it would make it easier to read. I enjoyed it, and would love to see it as you meant it to read! Either way, a vote from me:)
Keith it's amazing how by breaking up your lines but saying exactly the same thing, how it comes off the page to you. I told you I liked it and now you have re-structured it to get your message over more clearly it is really good! Your style is individual and your writing is great. Full credit to you I totally up my vote, loved this piece, great job!:)
Thank you! Couldn't of done without your help. Im happy to see my words are meaning something to others.
Thanks so much