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Lovesickness

Words have no meaning yet I'm here writing to this poem about their meanings. Ā 
How ironic. Ā 
Similarly to how words have no meaning yet, we use it when it is useful to us. Ā 
Either we stay shut or release a pile of meaningless dumpster fire words that hurt more, burns more, stings more, than sticks and stones. Ā 
The words releases out of anger hurts just like the same as the ones out of love. Ā 
Because the simplistic words make the most profound sentences that can change someone's very being. Just like when you told me you first loved me. Ā 
How meaningless. Ā 

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Gwendoline

Terrible when the heart feels used and played with. I loved this piece for its meaning (how ironic :) )Ā 
but honestly this is a good write. The last line was a real clincher. They say there is a fine line between love and hateĀ 

Sad yet powerful pieceĀ 
Gwen šŸ’› please keep writingĀ 

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Pratibha Savani

It's a powerful little write on love and heartache. Love the last lines. It really ties the meaningless words together. Brilliant! Px

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Being Me

Although they do mean something, words can indeed be also meaningless - if they are said without intent or much thought. I love that belter of a last line, it brought the whole poem into perspective. Very well done šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘ x

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