Poem -
~Low~
This pain that consumes meΒ
Can you feel my agony?
The darkness that swallows meΒ
Can you see me suffocate?
Drowning in my despairΒ
Can you feel me gasping for air?
I'm reaching out to findΒ
That no one is thereΒ
Can you see me trapped?
A tormented aching soulΒ
Dying inside looking for a way outΒ
Can you understand my demise?
Why I have these feelings that won't subside?
My wounds are deep insideΒ
The scars I can't hideΒ
Can you see my sadness that I carry inside?
Can you understand why I hurt all the time?Β
Copyright 10-04-08Β
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A gorgeous piece of poetic flow here JEANIE!!....... compelling in its questioning nature...... can you see my pain...... can you feel it?...... in a lovely delivery of poetic timing!!......VERY compelling write sweet poetess!!.......ALL STARS....... well done..........LOVE and ROCKETS!!........T xo
Thank you so much for your kind words βΊNamasteΒ
awesome write, a belated welcome to Cosmo. you have a new follower in me! :)
Thank you so much for your kind words βΊNamasteΒ