Poem -
The Dull World
I only ever search
For one who speaks
The same as I
For common folks
Don't speak of darkness
Dreams, adventure or the sky
I speak to faces
Who would rather
Give the dullest
Of replies
I speak to bodies
Who would rather
Sit and lie until demise
Can no one
Understand
My language
How I shout and how I cry
How I laugh and how I love
And how I ask that you don't sigh
But that you breathe in every breath
As if your last was lurking by
Can no one hear these words I speak
Am I alone, am I alive
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Hey ONLOOKER!!.......one........is the loneliest number!...........old song lyric that reminds me of this piece...........you are a pleasure to read my friend...............this is SO creative and beautifully delivered.........well done my friend...............Love and Rockets!!...........T xo
Not in my book it's not, I think it can be but it can also be the most poetic and powerful number alone, but every now and then you want something that reminds you of home, I don't mean companionship or love but plain and simple,...KINSHIP, I could live my whole life without ever feeling love if I could just find someone (gender is irrelevant) who gets it if you know what I mean, someone who understands me and doesn't want something, just... to simply exist with that knowledge, anywho alright man thanks for stopping by, we'll talk soon
Curious
Hey Curious!!..........glad I read this reply............and I agree with you partially.............I think you're right.......everyone wants to be truly understood regardless of gender.........what I love about your writing though is that it is TRULY curiously searching and evolving ..........right before our eyes.........you're an amazing cyber-colleague...........and I do respect your abilities my friend........write on brother..............much love.............T xo
Awesome write curious, I feel like that sometimes too,
You can't always find someone who can open up and have a conversation about anything or simply be who they were meant to be. Enjoyed reading allstars.
Thank you for understanding the intention of this message :)
CO
alone you are not. and alive you are ****** great writes
On comment above :lack of imagination you can say that again!!! question that all the time