Poem -
Making Rainbows Blindly
Making Rainbows Blindly
From the darkness of yet another hotel room
he watched her
as she scattered orange peel, amethysts and
pomegranate seeds
in the wake behind her in the street ..
Just maybe
he thought, before jumping, she might be
making rainbows
and so, instead, he chose to follow blindly ..
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I have an image of a barefooted lady skipping along the street with a basket from which she throws purple petals and orange peel and Ruby pomegranate seeds. The why doesn't matter, it is important to her that is all that matters. Love this for its freedom and images x
That'll do nicely ... very nicely indeed Tina ... thank you so much x
You are most exceedingly, very welcome xx
:) xxÂ
She WAS making rainbows....as the colors she scattered do imply.....an interesting decision....an even more interesting poem my friend......Like BM ~ I found the imagery quite magical.......ALL STARS!!....ever the pleasure NEVILLE!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.....T xo : )
Cosmic .. I am absolutely delighted that my little scribble served as the catalyst for some magical imagery Tony ...................... I have always maintained that poetry can give rise to some of the most wonderous trips imaginable ... who needs acid eh' ................................................................... Rockets raring to be reciprocated and released in your direction brother ... AGT's, Neville :)
Gotta take my hat off to a great poet when I read one x
flattery will get you anything & everywhere .. thanks Marion :) x