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Man is flawed...

Man is flawed...

Man is flawed it's written in the stars 
Man is flawed it's in histories laws 
Man is flawed we live our scars 
Man is flawed women are our clause 

In the grand text of how we live and how we believe we shall live, is within the hands of our holiness
Hallow be thy name, thou shall remain, for this life in vain, you'll only become creatures of weakness 

Are women not the same or even more powerful, as the ego of a man wont accept a higher power 
We as man are controlled by the female species 
We as man are propelled like over grown preachers
Superficial wounds of temple shoulders, we as corner stones of the earth,wimp as Cowards

Man is flawed it's written in the stars 
Man is flawed it's in histories laws 
Man is flawed we live our scars 
Man is flawed women are our clause 

If it weren't for women, the life they give, the world would be empty of birth
Science or religion, wherever your faith may be, it's in no way a binding curse
I am man but in no way perfect to the woman's eye 
They are the water of life so let's embrace the high tide 

So I ask you...
Is man flawed? 
Do you accept?

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Tony Taylor

hey WAYNE!!....I have to say that all though I don't agree with everything in this piece.....I MUST say you have been making leaps and bounds brother poet..... leaps and bounds brother....ALL STARS!!... well done...... LOVE and ROCKETS!!....T xo ?✳✴♥☀?♥

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Wayne Stubbs

Yeah it is quite controversial I was explaining to my daughter, that I wanted it on this subject but yet the piece still needed to be flawed, as a concept, if that makes sense Tony my poet brother haha ?

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Syd

A very clever write Wayne. I especially like the line 

They are the water of life so let's embrace the high tide 

Syd

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Wayne Stubbs

Thank you Syd, very much appreciated! Check out my 'hello me' poem, we all have our demons and play them to a different tune depending on our moods... ?

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Keith Fitzsimons

I like this Wayne and nothing wrong with controversy.
We want to write different poems about all kinds of subject matter. Not 100 love poems all saying the same thing but just moving words around..

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