Poem -
MANY MOONS AGO ( this for Jill tait moon challenge)
Many moons ago
the world was safer
place and cleaner place
Many moon ago they
sit by the fire in the moon
Light look up at the stars
Many moons ago the
environment on earth
was cleaner and space
and universe was cleaner
Many moons ago
People cared and did something
about it but as moons went by
no one seem to care then one
Day a little girl came along
and tried wake up the world
No one want to listen
who is this girl Greta Thunberg
she opened eyes to what is going on
gov around the world don't seem to
care they trun there backs and let go
but many moons ago the world was better
place many moons ago
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Awwww I guess many moons ago our world was a safer place Greg bless you & Thanks so much for taking my lil challenge about ol’ mr moonxxx?
Thank you Jill I want to
write this poem about the environment I did not know how to go about it in the title of this poem many moons ago came to me so I thought OK I’ll go with it I’m sure that the others will pick at me for writing one like this Will see
Haha mint!!
Jill did you see the The moon last night it was fun very beautiful I took a walk this morning
Well I’m in UK n tis a full ol’ moon out there n very eerie too :) wahooooooo (Jill tries to sound like a wolf!!) xxx
Must be quite late there I think 918 Time for bed soon good night sleep well
Nite nite Greg yes 9.21 here also yawnnnn xx
What a wonderful awareness write, Greg. So on point & love the way you have used the moon as your inspiration. Loved it ??
Thank you Tracey
Greg,
Fantastic write, my friend! Honestly. I know we've been kidding a lot, but sometimes you have to stop, and take a look around, and recognize the beauty we've been handed, and how we've done wrong with it. Pearls before swine.
Excellent writing!! Great idea!
Matthew.
Thank you Matthew
Matthew did you see the moon last night full moon very beautiful look tonight I walked in the moonlight This morning
I did see it, Greg! It was fantastic! I love the night sky, it's an amazing thing. It just awes me that there's a giant, round rock sitting up there reflecting the sun, and having an effect on our gravity! Outer space, for me, reminds me that something other than a 'big bang' created this incredible existence.
Thanks,
M.
Great poem. Well written. Well done. X
thank you Rachel
Fantastic Greg...sorry I hadn't seen this before....really enjoyed ??
Thank you Marion
Hey GREG!!.... I'm so glad to see that you got so much response to this poem!!......I also like the fact that you stressed how much cleaner all aspects of this planet used to be.... we often forget all that!!.......ALL STARS!!.... well done dear poet brother!!....... smiles.......T xo. : )
thank you Tony I would have say
maybe the environment was very
good back about 300 years ago
when there was no cars and factories
pollute the air but I could wrong I would have
to look that up
And this one I like and admire even more, agree with it wholeheartedly and you rote it awesomely see. Kudos aplenty.
Thank you