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Maze of Emotions

Maze of Emotions

Hot anger imprints the heart,
Because emotions get triggered.
Feelings lifted questioned.
Will this be enough?

Or is pain better off?
Sharp daggers rip apart years of trying.
Hopeless truth lied upon,
Leaving scared images.

Mind starts to take over,
Pushing in negative truths.
Everything decays,
With trust neglected.

So staying the same is powerless,
While blending in.
Your thoughts are characterized as coward.
Emotions get triggered leaving you wondering.

Strength weakens,
As dreams and reality shatter,
Showing hungry prays.
Feelings of being lost come true.

Stuck in mazes of misery,
Never able to find the exit,
Hoping help comes along,
While knowing its not worth a thought.

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Ella H

I just want to thank you all for reading this! I was wondering if you guys would mind telling me what kind of emotion you think this is? hope people who are going through this can also find a way out!

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Edward Williams

Omg I read this three times then scrolled down and read your comment 
sound to me like a neddle problem.  
If so it was excellent poem I think . Mainly because it could mean other things as well . In my theory .. the best material. Means different things to different people 
and I think that’s what you were trying to do here . 
Very good poem😊👏

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Edward Williams

Omg and I almost forgot ..Ella ..
I just finished a poem called the “ labyrinth “ 
was gona post in the mourning but I got to post it now after reading yours .
the world works in strange ways 

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Tony Taylor

This sounds like abuse to me..... and if I am not correct in my impression......I must say how well written and insightful the phrasing is here.....VERY well crafted dear poet sister ~

               ~ "Strength weakens,
                    As dreams and reality shatters..."

Smokin' grooves ELLA!!...... great poetic content!!......PINNED!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.........T xo 🐧✴❤

 

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Ella H

thank you. I appreciate the kind words

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Silent Dreamer

Wow! Ella, this is brilliantly written, I truly love it. For me it feels like trauma which causes feelings of anxiety/panic ... 

Mind starts to take over,
Pushing in negative truths.
Everything decays,
With trust neglected

Stuck in mazes of misery,
Never able to find the exit,
Hoping help comes along,
While knowing its not worth a thought

These lines really gave me that feel, as I've experienced much of it... so greatly expressed by you, I'm honestly in awe of this write! Pinned😍👏🏽👏🏽

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Ella H

aw thanks so much. Means a lot to me that people are able to guess right emotions 

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Ian William

Brilliantly written, Ella! The feeling of being trapped is overwhelming!

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