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Melancholonization

author
al Bikaadi

Her contageous sadness
 
It's prophetic in its rewinding
 
An empty entropy
 
Ensuring spring never arrives
 
The ships of joy pulled away by her tide
 
Away from lighthouse and sunrise
 
Away from a better life

 
Toward bleak perpetuation
 
Of glasses half empty and cutting

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Tragedy
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Gwendoline

This is wonderful to read. I can honestly say my grief made me find the glass half empty as I pushed life away. So easily done when you feel yourself drowning in sadness. I sensed this in this perfect write of watching someone drown in sorrow 

you are good 
Gwen 

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Marion

Aye me too Al...you got me in one!! Agree with Gwendoline. I'd say it's your best write yet. 🤗

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