Poem - 17 January 2014, 18:56

THANK YOU

Valerie Lynn

You threw the dagger
Perfect Impulse
Entering my heart Melting the ice

You threw the knife
Perfect Notion
Entering my back Severing the spine

Thank you
I suppose I deserved everything
You ever gave me

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Heart Ice

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Susan O'Reilly26 January 2014, 08:34

great write congrats x

Valerie Lynn26 January 2014, 14:38

Thank you Susan!!! Much Love!

♥ Val

AUTHOR WILLIAMS...27 January 2014, 23:32

Valerie Lynn,

Congrats on your winning nomination entry

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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