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THANK YOU

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Valerie Lynn
THANK YOU

You threw the dagger 
Perfect Impulse
Entering my heart Melting the ice

You threw the knife
Perfect Notion
Entering my back Severing the spine

Thank you
I suppose I deserved everything 
You ever gave me

© 2014 Valerie Lynn

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Heart Ice
Poetry Genre: 
Tragedy Verse
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WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

Valerie Lynn,

Congrats on your winning nomination entry

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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