Poem -
MELTING
Light reflecting to darkness
Melting my valorĀ into ice.
From beyond the deafening silenceĀ
Taunt me with your eyes...
The sun begins to fall
As you neglect to rise.
Born from death
It's time to run and hide...
Ā© 2014 Valerie Lynn
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Jon,
Thank you for taking the time to read and leave a sweet comment. Much appreciated!
<3 Val
A poem full of emotion, although that which melts, do have a tendency of gaining new hope and new life and the will to form once again, and you have all of the above....
Jim
What an awesome comment :) I loved it! Thank you Jim!
Val <3
Dear Valerie,
Poetry flows from the heart, so touching, so real, I bow my head to you, a great write, I love to read again, the below lines,
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
WILLIAMSJI - I appreciate you taking the time to comment on my poem. With every message I receive it gives me hope and more inspiration to write!
Val <3
This is what I want from all my dearĀ favoriteĀ Poets and Poetess, inspirations to write more and more
We are all under the shade of a POETREE.......
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI