Poem -
Memories
Sitting here I can remember a time, not long ago by any means. A time when my vision of this place even in my darker moods was not nearly so dull. Those times though, could not feel further from now even if I wished it. Yet, equally recent memories; ones that my only desire is they be forgotten. Sit the for front of my mind. As if without my consent; they have decided to take up residency there. In that decision they have condemned me to the sorrow they hold.
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Emotional feelings of a mature mind with limited sign of torment.
A really beautiful, deep piece Raven. The only little issue for me is the structure slightly, because I don't think it may get read in the way it deserves! However, for me, it moves and is written very well, and for that I definitely give it a bit vote :)
Thank you Rachel. I typed this up late the other night and had some mixed feelings about the structure myself. Alas, sleep won that battle! Again thank you!
Thank you for the comment :) Ravindra!