Poem -
IN MEMORY OF .....
This poem is written in memory of a tenth std student at our school, who demised yesterday.
Care intense from morn to midnight
Folded all over,with love almost,
Hope the buds may bloom still
Spread on pale an aching smile.
Alone drags to finish the circle,
Gloomy calm and darkness
Sudden halt to flat,
Merry moments to mourn
Stiffen,cold,staring in return !
Invited, a step ahead,to Him near by
With wings little to fly
The justice,the truth,no longer to cry
Smiles, from above,with utmost joy.
sayed thangal
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Thanks Williamsji, the incident was really a shock for all, special thanks for your sharing.
Thanks Williamsji, the incident was really a shock for all, special thanks for your sharing.
sayed beautiful poem in memory of that person i'm sure they would love this
all the best tina x
Thanks Tina,
It's a tribute towards her, pray for the peace of the soul.
i will sayed tina x
Dear friends, thanks for your sharing,
Dear Chris Correia, thank you very much for your comment and suggestions, but I'm not clear what you mean by the last two lines you mentioned, best wishes.
beautiful poem,it always sad to loose someone send my regards
sincerely Asmaa
Thanks Asmaa for your sharing
Thank you very much Rachel gradiner for sharing concern with me.
Very Nice!
Nancy
thanks Nancy.
your poem is really heart touching. very nice write i must say that binds the readers to the last line and then leaves them praying for the departed soul.
hasnain
Sayed my friend, Just as Chris has conveyed , i too pass forward my condolences and your poem echos the heart of not only a friend to another friend but of a man true in heart and in tune with his real feelings.Feelings that a lot of people take for granted and just don't display any more but needs to get back to .If all of our peoples was as sincere as you are in this poem to your friend death would not have an opportunity to exist, doors such as yours and others like you,he(death) would pass by as though he was the one afraid of the posibilities of a demise.Keep your heart open and face full of smile sir, for your care and concern is one of sincerity and feelings of true and you i commend and respect you always and all days, you wear your heart in your smile.
Stay sincere my friend and brother,
Jim
Dear Khan and Jim,
I express my deep gratitude for the sharing, I composed this poem as three parts, as you stated the last part is a consolation , an inevitable part , and a happy note. thanks once more.
Sayed-
I love this poem, it is beautiful, really!
Nancy
thanks