Poem -
Midnight Misty Fair
She topples mountains
With this silence
Oh, this silence
She does wear
A clairvoyance
For my interests
She does pick apart the air
Where escapades
May escalate
I dare not say
She's to compare
For none may glare
Upon my soul
As my midnight
Misty fair
She calculates
The tides of heart
I pray she look
Not through my hair
For she may see my
Open mind and all
Its secrets laid to bare
Was one so prone
To lose his way
Such regal guidance
Made it clear
For none may glare
Upon my soul
As my midnight
Misty fair
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Ooo this reminds me of good ol Poe's writes, are you sure you weren't his apprentice in some crazy past life? 5 stars :)
~Bady
Who knows maybe I was, but I'll never tell ;)
YES ONLOOKER!!..........you found such an elegant delivery here..........on subject matter so dear to my heart............Metaphysics!! (My love, also my blog)...........when you cross that line where most people recoil with doubt...........you find yourself having to define your own personal belief system..........you have driven home the idea of telepathic potential here........and the clairvoyance that can develop between spirits filled with Love and true curiosity about one another.........what is SO gorgeous though.......is the poetic delivery..........the attention to rhythm..........the heartbeat that creates the ambiance so VERY hard to forget in your reader..........the difference between a good read.........and a memorable read.........such elegance and obvious care........complimented by a Perfect Pic!!..........WOW!!....... 8*s FAV .........also like the E666 write very much.........you my friend..........are on your way to being able to say to yourself (and truly believe it)...........I AM a WRITER............an incredibly difficult task for any individual attain.........smokin' ass grooves brother!!..........Smokin' grooves!!.............Love and Rockets!!..........T xo
I'm absolutely euphoric that you enjoyed this one :) I wanted to leave a remembrance in my collection of poetry saying "hey I can write stuff like this too" whereas people know that my realm of write may stretch long and wide, I wanted people to know "I can too" but for its metaphysical properties I knew this would be a hit for you my friend and you reading this poem has made all the difference, I had to really appreciate your comment before speaking on it, but I want to thank you tons brother, and give you my thanks as a fellow poet
Much love brother T, CO
Oh my goodness you are good! There was not a single flaw in this poem in my opinion. I love the picture, the title, the rhyme scheme, everything haha be careful around her big bro she sees all even your deepest thoughts!