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Yiyan Han

God must have been smiling as you told Him already. Nice one.

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Jim "The Lad" ....

I think He smiles if we try to "tell" Him anything! I"m sure He listens! When in the past I try and tell Him what He already knows, I call it "wrestling with the Lord in prayer!" I was in such distress I "wrestled " while He was infinitely patient with an impatient mortal being! Nice thought provoking write Herve!.....Jim

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