Poem -
Missing bliss
I so miss the bliss,
Of my lovers kiss.
I’ve been crazed and dazed,
Without your face.
Since you left.
I’m forever in dept,
of my own Regrets.
Our song comes on,
And I know I’m wrong
To say we’re you belong.
Where I reside
Is alone inside.
The clock stops,
Every time I cry.
And I could never deny a line,
that brings the savoury brine.
The phone rings,
Part of me dies.
It’s never you.
Why do I try.
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Comments
Hello Edward...
If there's still a chance why not try?
Great and sad write!
Thank you for sharing...
Best wishes and blessings!
Hugs...
sparrowsong
Thanks sparrow .. just hypothetical and thought provoking .. acually that’s what I want people who read to get from it .. to ask the question ..why not try ?.. you are right.and thanks again for reading
Very well portrayed, I definitely felt sorrow and loss in this write and naturally gained a lot of sympathy. Well written.
Edward,. This is sweet! Terry Kay
Thanks Simon.. thanks terry
Such a sorrowful piece and beautifully descriptive...the loss and emptyness is palpable! good work Edward!
Lodigiana x
Thank you Lodigiana?