Poem -
MISSION... IMPOSSIBLE...
What now?
these words form
galleon ships
in molten skies
imperious, defeated,
magnificently high
the clouds, rock hard tales
crushed to boulders by time
the narrative alien,
unreadable, not mine
and you, deep green velvet
a soft honeyed hue
coasting gently in mists
just beyond
just in view...
unreachable
what now...
M P 20/6/21
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Comments
Good write Price! Unparalled imagination.
Thankyou kind sir 🤗
Wow Marion you are the master of words and imagery. Their is anguish in this I sense. Such sadness ❤️
Thanks love...be in touch soon..just trying to catch up.on here ...hugs 💕
All good lovely 💗 I had my second vaccine today. Feeling a bit off right now anyhow. Hugs xoxox
Awwwww indeed my lovely lass…what now???? ❤️🌹❤️💕
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I tell you something Marion my
lovely lass alas, sadness hasn’t half made u shine brighter than any celestial ⭐️
You are kind my friend...🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
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I agree with the other comments Marion. You are brilliant had ingenious lines. So what now...?! Pinned. Pxxx
Thankyou love...really appreciated ❤️
Marion you are simply the bee's knees, the dog's doodahs, the poet's poet.
An angst write mirrored by your attentive imagination.
A real touch of poetry class and a cut above.
Full honours, but it's not about stars and pins.
It's about the words and what words indeed.
Thanks for writing and sharing and simply take care my friend.❤️
Thankyou lovely man x