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Misunderstood Dream

Misunderstood Dream

“You don’t know how important the pen is, until it is missing”

I haven’t been able
to safely find the proper cursive style,
on these buttons online.

This keyboard is littered with queen of misery....misconception.
And the king of misdirection.

Facebook, and texting is ruining besties.
The caps that I typed,
started a fight 
But it’s not what I meant 
it’s all been in spite 
“I’m just saying”
“Don’t take it the wrong way PLEASE”

This “state of the farce”
Networking has got us on our knees.
Things are not always the way it seams.

You thought I was cross....
I thought you were mad with me.

Before you know it were hopelessly fighting over something that’s not even real.

“It’s stereotypical, to assume its political.
But it’s just been a misunderstood dream.”
 

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Tony Taylor

Intensely observant and poetically profound..... It's crazy how online conversations etc.  Can become so easily misconstrued....... you've conveyed subject matter that is not often dealt with poetically...... well done dear poet brother!!...... you continue to surprise and grow my friend!!.....ALL STARS!!...... well done!!......T xo ?✴❤

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Edward Williams

Thank you tony im glad you said online conversations “etc”.. because I am talking about all kinds of communication ... fine print .. horribly written legal legislation.. FAKE news .. 
Just be open minded on what you read or even see and hear....my dad always told me “believe none of what you hear and only half of what you see”

also a second message here about the struggles of being amateur writer . I failed English with 19%?.so it’s hard to learn how to write when I have been txting most of my life using abbreviated words and not using any punctuation what so ever ?
people are loosing the art of writing soon we will be all typing in code
lol haha rofl lmfao ... 
Eddy
 

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Rose Sho

Very true...I try as much as possible to abbreviate words even when it's SMS that I know I would be charged for every alphabet I write...Writing is fast losing it place and a lot of people prefer not to write at all unless when it's very necessary.

Thanks for sharing

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Edward Williams

Thank you rose ..you are right people don’t need to write any more Idono about any were else but they scraped cursive writing in my kids school . It’s not kool . And it’s just wonderful to find the satisfaction in hobby writing .. it should be more popular I love movies and u tube ( mostly documentary)but it’s like reading and writing is not viable any more .. funny tho the writers of the movies still got it and literature is still a major part of everything BUT . We are still brand new in this new tech age just. Infants .. and already there taking cursive writing out of school what’s next? English class is combined with computer class no need for pens and pencils any more !we are so addicted to “..easy “..as humans that it is very liable  to quickly lose touch with the art of pen and papper

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A Lonely Journey

Hey Edward, 
Great writing, and so true. Love that last line! 
I've been part of such things where people have gotten mad, even though I'm saying something completely different than how they're taking it. It's a tough medium sometimes. 
Enjoyed that very much. 

Matthew. 

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Edward Williams

Yes that’s what inspired me to write this poem Mathew thanks for the support

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lodigiana

You have absolutely worded this brilliantly Eddy! I can relate exactly to everything  you say..my fat   fingers  are always typing unwanted keys and reducing the text  to inane rubbish!,,,and those upper case letters oh my! Can they get me into trouble? Yes they can..unfortunately unless read out,the written word doesn't always convey the emotional aspect of a conversation and is so easily misread and misunderstood.Loved this unique and innovative piece..Lodigiana xx

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Edward Williams

I’ll Am glad it has touched you and I hope people learn something from this 
and that is read carefuflluy,, don’t judge. Unless you know .. and choose your words conservatively thanks for reading

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