~ MOLTEN PREMONITIONS ~
If hopes were fakirs, fears waiting to be liars
And learned eyes, the sun's
Most radiant vestigial organ
With seeming inches to gain
Then humanity would
Finally awaken
From its ancient slumber
Beyond the clothing of inherent pain
Beyond this place of wrath and torment
Swift and treacherous sands of sin
Would be washed clean
Into organized chaos
As if to convey
The sun was made round
By peels of flame
Like tongues of molten premonitions
Producing astral projection
As armor for atavistic armies
Where we are the spokes
Of a single wheel
Of an unmatched oneness
Fired in kilns of the metaphysical
Adorned in telepathic waves
Of the creators
Singular weapon,
The shimmering sword,
Of unshakeable
Faith...
Tony Taylor
* just thinking
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wonderful poem Tony
so wonderful you
are the master poet
Thank you GREG!!......you are TOO kind!!......fist bump brother!!....Peace.....T xo : )
Truly Awesome ❤️🌹❤️
Thank you kindly Miss JILL!!......smiles.....T xo : )
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Hi Tony,
Very good.
Terry
love,
xoxo :)
Thank you TERRY!!....hope all is well with you and yours!!......T xo : )
I admire anyone who manages to achieve this amazing place of faith Tony. I was once on this very path but then it crumbled. Blessings to you ...Great write x
HOLY COW MARION!!...if I may be so presumptuous....I beg to differ dear lady......I feel in my heart that you are still on that path which you feel you have lost.....for faith does not abandon a soul EVER......it may be difficult to intuit its presence.....but I promise you that within that unmatched oneness, of which we are all a part by birthright, there is a shared an unparalleled power called faith that never abandons a single soul.....ever. I know that I am just a face on the internet....but in these past months I have come to know of its existence by experience that shapes!! Trust me my friend.....it IS inside you!!....I send you love and great thanx for your kind words and amazing support of this site!!......You, dear poet sister, are an exceptional writer and very kind soul!!.....and I am your cyber-friend and ever-admirer!!....Tony xo : )
Your comment has touched me deeply friend, I take much comfort from your words. And you are not just a face on the internet Tony...I see us all as siblings on a journey of expression together and those who stay the course and participate, enrich each other in untold ways...hugs x
really cool write Tony! I was on that crumbled path that Marion mentioned, and found faith of which you eloquently convey! You are so right about faith never leaving us! cool comment!.............................Jim
Why thank you kind sir.....I am ever so aware of the profound faith you carry my friend....it is in MUCH of your poetic offerings!!.......and I am always happy to enjoy your work JIM!!......thanx again!!......your cyber-friend and admirer.......T xo : )
An awesome poem. Yes, it talks of faith but it really invites the reader to think about more than just God and Jesus ( because faith is so much more). Your work is always of the highest calibre but this, in my book, is definitely one of the best ones x
WOW!! Thank you BEING ME!!....you are ABSOLUTELY correct about my intention here......this poem (to my mind) goes far beyond the offerings of Christianity.....for there exists far more in this universe than humanity alone......and humanity itself has far more to offer than many are yet aware of.....I am so grateful to you Miss TINA!!.....your comments and insights mean much to me and this entire site.....for your love poetry is VERY apparent.....and your comprehension is quite outstanding....thanx again dear poet sister.....your cyber-friend and admirer....T xo : )
interesting poetry Linda
Thank you Miss LINDA!!