Poem -
morning sun
To me its the best part of the day its like the earth has been cleansed and all of natures creatures just play The song of the birds And dew soaked grass The river is calm and smooth as glass. Smells abound and mountain mist. Breath it all in its as sweet as a lovers kiss.
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Very nice poem. Good job, nice and short and full of alliteration to twinkle the ear. Good job man.
Ha thank you.
Pure Reasoning,
Last half of the poem if fully poetic and natural. I love it. Congrats and Thanks for sharing this short verse. The loved lines are being quoted below:
" The song of the birds
And dew soaked grass
The river is calm and smooth as glass. Smells abound and mountain mist. Breath it all in its as sweet as a lovers kiss."
Regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Thank you
:) lol I guess