Poem -
Mortality
A probationary state,
Evaluating test!
We hope to rate;
And obtain our rest.
The finite view;
Of mortality.
Contrasts the span;
Of eternity.
To win the day;
Perspective is key!
A central play;
Then is agency.
Will we choose;
The daunting with right?
Or dwindle;lose;
Give up the fight!
Take up the sword!
And use your elective.
See with The Lord
The eternal perspective.
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Brilliant! 👏👏👏 Loving the waves in this too! Awesome work ⚘ x
thank you Being Me! I'll take brilliant and you can't take that back! lol!
And I wouldn't want to take it back! 😉 x
Abfab I love your wavey layout too 💕💙💕
waving at you Jill! thank you!
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thanks JP!
sure! thanks Rob tried collaborating with sir fish, it didn't go well because I have to find my own inspiration, but to find it to convey the thoughts of others seems difficult.
Cracking write Jim...love the format because isn't that just life...rolling waves? x
thank you Marion! those waves do pound us!
Aye...they also bring the seashells Jim but mostly we trample them don't we? I think the secret is there...in the seashells Jim X
jewels!
Great write Jim, agree with all the comments above, the layout was fitting and I really liked the beat you created with the short sentences. Mortality is an interesting topic, it is different for everyone to deal with. Excellently delivered here
thank you Shelley-anne for taking the time to give me feed back! it makes my day and helps so much!..........................................Jim