Poem -
MOSQUITOS TO RAID
The weight of loss...
The weight of pain...
When you don't think you can handle anymore weight...
You find out you can?
Knowing the things that you can't change...
No amount of wishing and praying can change a thing...
Pain in pounds can feel like a thousand or more?
When you feel as though you have nothing more to lose...
Is that when you can be free?
Nothing hurts as much anymore...
It isn't that you have a hardened heart...
The weight of pain just doesn't seem to effect you as it once did?
Does each cause and effect touch your feelings so that things don't hurt as much as before?
Have you become immune like mosquitos to raid?
Hugs...
sparrowsong
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A lot to consider herein,
trauma, pain, break ups.
Health, the soul, tenacity;
dont mind me rambling on
your poem says a lot to think about.
Great write!
Luv from Jai :)
Hello Jai...
Thank you for your input my friend...
You have great points...
I am sure you could have added more and...
I certainly would not have minded one bit...
There are many hurts and heartbreaks, trauma as you mentioned...
I have personally seen what it can do to a person...
The ones that just can't take it anymore...
I have seen people that just a day before was laughing, talking, throwing darts, and able to tie their shoes...
To them waking up in a hospital bed...
Having to learn to do those things again...
Went from twenty-three years old back to a ten month old baby in a day...
He couldn't say what happened...
Couldn't remember his mother at first...
His Mother was a friend of mine and he had plans that he was going to get married...
His girlfriend left him...
He was the only child...
His mother had to sell everything to help her Son...
She was completely lost...
Thank you for your comment!
Sorry for my rambling...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
Hello Sis Flower Girl...
You are right...
Sometimes, for me it's seems better to be hit with things all at once...
Instead of recovering from one then...
Here comes another...
Thank you for your comment...
Purple luv and hugs xo :)
sparrowsong
Powerful, dramatic tone delivers a thought provoking piece !
Very strong work of an engaging nature. Your work often delivers a message in an articulate manner easy to relate to.
Thanks for sharing. Love and hugs. :)
Hello Richard...
Your comment is an honor to be received...
Thank you very much!
Thanks again for being there!
Love and hugs :)
sparrowsong