MOTHER NATURE'S CRYING..
Into a fine distraction
Say us, alas, that which cannot tell your grief
Had not your splendid pulchritude
Been threatened, and left us on our knees
Many a tear does flow confusedly
Say us, dear Mother Nature
For we must your loving disorder
Replenish, embellished (need be)
So must we support the natural oracle
Producing the miracle that begs 'ascend'
We pray with purity.... Please
Do not ask us to sit by and mourn at oxygen's tomb
For it's within our symbiotic relationship
That contained in a loving cup neglected
The balance of our lives, inherently depends
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Somehow, we've strayed from the course held before
Our forests are dying, our children are crying
And what now must caring hearts intend,
Is your most fundamental aspect
By our own hands, given a re-birth
And thusly enriched in mind and spirit
May we not manifest some sacred course
Shed our own stupidity
Bringing forth your holy resurrection
Recalling the ancient evidence
Of humanity and Mother Nature's
Perfectly balanced cycle
Of interdependent loveliness
And God-given,
Wistful,
Worth...
Tony Taylor
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Comments
I have written something similar to the message here.
However this is written far better that one could hope for!
great job!
Cool!!....Thanx KEITH!!.... I'd like to read that some time..... just send me the title ~ if you don't mind, and I'll give it a go!!.....thanx again brother poet!!...... love to you and yours!!......T xx ?✳✴☀??
It is called 'The Demons In The World Are Human',but it is nowhere near as good as this one!
Ok Keith...,.I'm on it bro!......ttyl....T ?
Hello Tony...
Thank you for your Research and writing about an important Subject...
A Subject that brings enlightenment...
Beautiful write!
Thank you for sharing...
Hugz and Smiles!
Love and Rockets!
Feathers
No worries!!...thanx SO much for this SPARROWSONG!!....oh wow!.....I NEVER call you that!!...... smiles...... stay groovy FEATHERS!!.... glad you like it !!......much love to you and yours!!......T xo ?✳✴♥☀??
well Tony- another splendid , insightful piece of literary magic! You have made Mother Nature a reality to us and as such we can share her fears and concerns whilst looking at the part we have 'contributed' Our wonderful planet is always evolving and maybe we can help put a smile back on Mother Natures face- Great piece and a joy to read!
Love it!! xxx
Lodigiana
Hey Thanx LÔDIGIANA!!!!.....much appreciated and I agree..,., It would be such an awesome thing if we could a smile back on the face of Mother Nature!!..... Because right now....I guarantee there's NOTHING for her to smile about!!.....thanx again for your support and kind cyber-friendship!!......LOVE and ROCKETS!!....T xo ?✳✴☀♥??
Masterful Tony! I know I may not comment on your work so often....the truth is.... many times, it is beyond me. I admit that I don't always understand everything you write, your knowledge and use of language surpasses my simple education, so I apologise for being unable to fully appreciate some of your work. This I understood and liked, and having just seen it, after I have just posted a work with a similar message, feel I should mention the coincidence! Much respect my friend ☺
Hey JOHN!!.., no worries my friend.... it's funny you mention that now because I had a conversation with Cherie about it yesterday...... she was noticing that she gets double the amounts of comments on her work as I do on mine...... we both decided it's because I write on such a bizarre/unpopular subject matter A LOT!!..... Hey, what can I say....writers write about what they know or are familiar with..... and I guess I'm just a weirdo in that way! (smiles)......thanx for giving me the heads up on your poem...,. I'll head to your page in a few......thanx for the awesome comment brother poet!!!......LOVE and ROCKETS!!.....T xo ?✳✴♥???
As always reading your work is like reading from the great poet himself "Shakespeare "!
WOW!! GREG!!... that's one helluva compliment & comment ....and as much as I would like to agree.....I am NOT in that league of writers!!..... but I appreciate the kindness brother!!..... Kings to you!!......T xo ?✳✴☀♥??
My Dear Brother Poet Tony,
Oh Dear Mother Nature
Your tears inundate my heart
Your pain saturates my Soul
I am but one man
So powerless in this world
Where evil ones rule
They gang rape you, as you scream out in pain
They kill your Children, as you sob in sorrow
They bathe in profits of inhumanity
Some day they will have to answer for those sins
But, will it be in time, Dear Mother Nature
This man begs his Lord
Please come quickly, and save Her
Love,
Larry xxx
Amen to that Dear Brother Poet!!.....I too pray that it will be in time..... your skill with the pen grows more brilliant with the passing of time...... and our planet suffers..... we shall keep writing for the progress of the whole.....I thank God for your kindness LARRY!!...... much love to you and yours!!......thanx SO much for this!!.....Txo ?✳✴♥♥☀???
Dear Tony,
Together we bond, to fight Mankind's tyranny,
Trying to save our beautiful planet
And Mother Nature, it's Guardian
Love you Bro,
Larry xxx