Mr. Anderson-Brown (written on 4/14/16)
My name is Mr. Anderson followed by the hyphen and then the Brown
Made this poem a little different to show you that I can and know how to get down
I can switch up the tempo rhyme with no beat
Each poem reminds you to outgrow, persevere, to never show defeat
They're About...
.(C)ompassionÂ
...(H)ope
   (R)omanceÂ
     (I)nspiration
  Our (S)aviourÂ
 Whose(T)riumphant
CHRIST will send his angels down have to listen for the trumpetsÂ
One day we'll hear them at the gates of heaven during judgement
There's only one way in and we most definitely can't jump it
Live life right make sure God's laws aren't broken
We're not perfect we'll break some thankful that back then Jesus broke sin
"I am the way the truth and the life" is Jesus's simple way of telling us there only one way into heaven and well that yes he is the token
He died on the cross , washed away all our sinsÂ
He showed us whose the boss, where a true relationship with God begins
Reminds me I'm one of his children and that I'm truly blessed
Keep pursuing him and he is only one we are to impress
We give him praise 24/7 Â no less
Good days we smile bad days we frown
He picks me up even when I fall down
Suit me up ,I'm Mr. KiJon Anderson-Brown
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Hey Mr. ANDERSON-BROWN............ this was a compelling and clever..........I like the way included the CHRIST like an acoustic..........VERY clever.......... you write with a great sense of rhythm ........like a lyricist endeavors to accomplish with songs.............. of course your subject matter here will reach many.......... and you conveyed your faith well brother poet...........ALL STARS.......... well done..........T xo
Thank you sir!!!!!! Glad you picked up on that I always hope that someone can pick up but the message and what I try to portray based on how I set up the lines/stanzas with adding alittle mix of fun and inspiration.. Thank you again .. And i actually wish to start writing songs God willing.. I tried in my other poem Rise when we die ... I like the flow of writing like a lyricist.. Appreciate your time and you reading this poem :)
Hi Kijon,
This piece is a wonderful, well written piece and so well thought out and delivered, well done on writing such a great message for us in poetry and I`m sure that Jesus just loves your work. I agree with Tony and all of what he has said in his message to you. I promise to read more of your work and to comment on them. You are a very talented writer honey and you are a great asset to the Cosmo family and I`m sending you a great big welcoming hug. You will make many friends on here as we all look on ourselves as one big happy family and there are very talented writers here that you will receive a lot of great advice and encouragement from. I hope you are enjoying your experience so far and will continue to do so as we are all good friends on here and I know that we will all enjoy your work, so welcome to the fold honey and have lots of fun.
God bless and keep you safe
Love G xx
Thank you soooo much really appreciate you for taking the time to make such a nice comment ... love this site and being able to post I hope to soon publish a book of my own with poems ??Praying :)Â
You`re welcome Kijon and I`m glad you are enjoying the Cosmo family.
Love G xx