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“Mr. Moon are you alright ?” 🌚

“Mr. Moon are you alright ?” 🌚

I was staring at Mr. Moon betwixt the blackness of midnight, and I wondered as I pondered “Was he feeling alright ?”

He looked ever so pale amidst the waning twilight, not at all like his usual sensational sight..Yes indeed he still had his wide-gaped yawn, but I could sense his sadness of forlorn..

So I shouted up to that cloudless sky “Mr. Moon is there something  amiss as you pass me by ?” And then I swear that he dripped a teardrop from his eye, it fell down to earth from ever so high..

Now I know that big old moon heard me, coz he tilted his huge head so I could see..and there was dark night sky where his yellowness should be, some of that roundness was missing regretably..

But then when my weary eyes was blinking, as my head got sore from too much thinking..I thought ‘Of course Mr. Moon will not be round, it is nearly a new moon that should be found’ Then I blew him a kiss and I whispered “Goodnight” and I closed my curtains and cuddled in my duvet so tight...

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Greg Etsell

i love the the moon 
i have worte  poems
in the past in hare 
but yours is so 
wonderfu; as alway 

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Jill Tait

Awwww me too we both adore that big old Mr. Moon 🌕❤️💙❤️

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Shaun Cronick

Nice one  and I'm sure and God willing Mr Moon will be alright to captivate us once again.💙
It like your poetry never fails to disappoint from a small child to mature adult.
Simply magical and a joy to behold.❤️
Thanks for writing and sharing Jill, five deserving stars and pinned too. 

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Jill Tait

Aww I adore your kind comments & you give me such inspiration to keep on writing ❤️💙❤️

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