Poem -
Multi-Racial Dream
When I dream
I dream in color,
When I awaken
I'm, in black and white,
With every virtue
With every grace
My mind whirls in wonder
About this humanย race,
Am I not of value
By being Multi-racial
Is this not,
A melting pot,
Or is this
Still,
The dream...
Tony Taylor
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Powerful undercurrent to this well thought out piece.
Good work !
Hug ! ย :)
Thanx SIR WATERS!!.....LOVE this comment brother poet.......... undercurrent...... amen!!...... Smiles.........T x
:)
Tony it doesn't matter what others think of you. only what you see in yourself. what I see is a very talented writer. your skin is only a covering to a beautiful heart and soul.
Thanx SO much DARKLY!!..... that was awfully nice........ truth is a hard thing to convey perfectly....... you delivered a strike and I thank you my friend........HUGZ!!........T xo.ย ?
very good poetry and very poiginat linda
Thanx LINDA!!!......I Love this comment...... short and powerful!!........HUGZ!!.........T xo.ย ?
Hi Tony Iย don`t see black and white ย I just see peopleย
I look at the character of a person whats inside if they have aย good kind heartย
You my friend are one of those people and it happens to beย
even more cool that you have a talent to write beautiful poetry thatย
shows your heart,ย
ย Great write Love n hugs Debs xo
ย
Thanx so much DEBS!!!......I didn't even need to read this comment to know what you might have said...... sometimes I feel like I know you...... and one thing is for sure......I know you're an angel...... the good kind......, not those bad one's LOL!!.......thanx for being the lovely soul that you are........ sorry it took a few to get back to this........ ttyl sweetie!!...... LOVE and ROCKETS!!........T xo.ย ?
Hey Tony...This is a short powerful one....It has no much underneath...We all have different sides...Black and White (my interpretation)
Lots of love
Hey dear ROSE!!...... yes!!.....I AM half black and white....... and I was really just venting..... I'm used to it....... it's just that I never dreamt about it before....... so when I woke up from the dream it was strange to realize that I had never had such a dream before..,.. because I pretty much like whom I am...... and although I've been confronted by racism...... for the most part I've found it to be advantageous to have parents with open minds and hearts!!.....thanx for being cool!!.....I appreciate it girlfriend !!.......smiles.......T xo.ย ?
I always look into the heart of someone when I meet them. I've been judged for the way I appear and it's one of the worst feelings. It made me and still does make me feel lonely and misunderstood. Beautiful write. Short and strong~ย
xxxLilyย
We are both the same in that way LILY!!..... much more than you know!!....... smiles......thanx for this sister girl !!........ttyl.......LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo.ย ?
Not much to say as you said it all
other than you speak the truthย
and let's pray for equality and justness.ย
My love to you Tony :) Jai
Love back at ya JAI MASTERS!!....... love that name of yours brother poet!!........thanx for this my friend!!........ peace!!......T xo.ย ?
My Dear Brother Poet Tony,
Bring in the dream merchants. ย Is our life but a dream, and the dreams true reality? ย Is a mans true worth not based on his outer hue, but rather the color of his heart? ย Dare to dream. ย Reach for the stars, where dreams come true.
Peace, Love and Rockets,
xox Larry