Poem -
MURKY MIRAGE
My mind
Continually evolves
Into empty
Black Chambersย
Forever binding
Bloody images
Secretly blinding
Troubled waters
Casting memories
Distorted bodies
Haunting eyes
Stories untold
Recollection permit
Shattered lives
Rapture disguise
Better options
Inferior lies
Our choices
Fixated obsessionย
Forever dormant
-Valerie Lynn and Linda Hope
Co-write between Mother (Linda Hope) and Daughter (Valerie Lynn)
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Hi ย Valerie and Linda ย I think yourย
write tells of bad memories that areย
on your mind but sort of kept secret never to beย
told (only my interpretation) Iย love the mysteryย
in your words Great writeย
Best wishes Debsย
ย
I am beyond proud of this write with my mama!! This is how insomnia can benefit writing. She is my rock and has supported me through thick and thin. She has and continues to beย there for me in all that I am going through. I am the luckiest daughter to have not only an amazing woman as a mother but have the most wonderful mother any daughter could ever ask for. I am the blessed one. I didn't know about her little hidden talent until this past year and I was blown away reading her writing!! I am trying to encourage her to post more and I think she will!! Thanks for the comments! I can't wait to tell herย tomorrow thatย someone actually read it and left comments!!ย
-Val ?
beautiful write.
Thank you! Truly appreciate the lovely comment!
Val ?
WOW!!......so glad I didn't miss this!!......didn't realize you had been posting again......I LOVE the staccato way you delivered the phrasing here......makes for a flawlessness between Mother and Daughter as you integrate one another's lines.......VERY cool read!!.......high fives to you and you Mom......."Forever dormant"??.......compelling ladies!!........ALL STARS.......T xo