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My bath-tub...hot water....candles & me

My bath-tub...hot water....candles & me

Lighting my candles for ambience & calm...Sprinkling some slithers of soothing balm
Running my water of pureness & heat, ready & undressed I step in with my feet

I bathe in my bath in the darkness of the night with flickering candles for  atmospheric delight... remedying, relieving... relaxing my soul... a sensational, spiritualistic self control

Lathered in lovable liquid & bubbles... my thoughts are carefree from languish & troubles, as I steep in my spume of fantasised illusion... a perfect pipedream, my reverie profusion

Such a solitary requiescence... a luxurious pleasure to soak in a hot-tub at one’s momentary leisure... lost in complacency of peacefulness... a bed of roses of coziness... Indeed all the greatest gifts are free... my bath- tub... hot water... candles & me

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A Lonely Journey

Jillybean, 
That was soooooo relaxing that I nearly fell asleep at my desk! Wonderful writing, as usual. You really make the reader feel as if they are there...but I did slip on a bar of soap, and cracked my noggin a bit. But despite the grey matter, and blood oozing from my skull area, I still thoroughly enjoyed that! 

Honestly, it was really great Jill. 

Matthew. 

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Jill Tait

Awwww Thanks chuck so pleased u felt the relaxation  .... that was my
purpose :) teehee I hadn’t bar of soap in me tub tho just latherable lotion lol xx:)

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Jill Tait

Awww so glad to enjoyed my ditty Lauren luv thank u so much 💕💕💕

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Cherie Leigh

Aaahhhh!  I can so relate...This is one of my favorite places to be as well....a moment of pure peace to relax and regroup my thoughts after a busy day....a little bit of pampering....short as it may be....but soooooo relaxing...Thanks for bringing me there...xo ;) 

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Jill Tait

Yep that’s exactly what I was hoping for Cherie, to enjoy it’s imagery without actually having a bath!!!! Teehee Thank you luv XXX🤣💕

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