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My dad

washing is done, tidy the house kids off to school, quiet as a mouse dinner is done, time to sit down but in he walks, face with a frown "make me a cuppa,feed me as well" hate him so much, just go to hell hes back off to work, kids in from school feed them and bath them, everything is cool nine at night, the time i dread hes come back, he wants me in bed touching and kissing, leave me alone takes no notice, he just has a grone releaving himself, the dead is done god i feel dirty ,leave me alone hes gone back to work, peace at last bathed and in bed, put in the past keep our little secret, no one to know i so want to die, i so want to go dont tell no one, keep it well hid DAD was so scared , coz i was his kid 
 

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Syd

This is horrific. I hope your father was brought to justice.

Take care - Syd 

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Julie Cook

He was x thank you for your comment 

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Eli Wilde

I don’t have words to express how much this poem grabbed me...I truly don’t. 
Thank you for sharing this piece.

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Julie Cook

Your more than welcome thank you for reading it 

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Tony Taylor

Julie!!  This, is a friggin' NIGHTMARE!!..... the kind of narrative that is not only compelling but takes the reader into THAT PLACE.... which no one speaks of...,makes people vomit.....because.....SO MANY can see the truth in these words of yours...... it needs to be reformatted for optimum impact... but..... it is an incredible write....I pray to the heavens that this is a fiction...... if not..... someone needs to be arrested, jailed, and rehabilitated........ if that's not possible..... their testicles need to be removed!!....... Astounding realism here dear poet sister!!...... amazing début piece!!......PINNED!!......and......WELCOME to COSMO!!......LOVE and ROCKETS!!....T xo ????❤❤??

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