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MY DAYS ARE COUNTED

MY DAYS ARE COUNTED

My days are counted

Oh, my son, the only son

Face wrinkled, memories vague

It's me, mother, your old mother.

     Wished long, long ago, a little face to see

     Days not passed without prayers

     Blessed with you at last, in the old

     Happiest, the memorable moments.

Earlier me, your Dad

Called by Him, the wound unhealed,

Closed his eyes, frozen,

Only three you be, in my lap.

     Have I been a shadow to you

     From dawn to dusk 

     Had I  not tasted before you have

     Snore at sleep, only then me to bed.

Not knew the span long time

Near to me come, for the legs ungrip 

Hold my hands, just they tremble

Closer to me, eyes faded, gloomy.

     Oh, dear son, the only son

     My days are counted

     Had I been to you all,

     A little, just for me, before I leave.

sayed thangal

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Susan O'Reilly

ah lovely emotional write Sayed much enjoyed cheers x

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Sayed Thangal

Thanks so much Susan for your positive and creative response.

sayed

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Amber Barbour

Yes, this is a sweet and sad poem! Poems are pieces of our soul,thanks for sharing yours!

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Michelle Fazio

Feel as if i just read a powerful love story. :'( O:-)

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Sayed Thangal

I don't know how your imagination directed in such a way, thanks very much.

sayed

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Louise Carroll

Ahh lovely write, well done. Full of emotion and love. Well done. 

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Sayed Thangal

Hi Louise, you are welcome. you have read this poem with utmost care , I know.

thanks for your comment, sayed

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Sayed Thangal

Thanks Susan for your loving comment.

with regards, sayed

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Valerie Beasley...

This is a very emotional write...your emotions are raw and exposed to the reader.  Excellent!  val

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Sayed Thangal

Hi Valerie, thanks for the encouragements, I like this type of emotional and mystic topic to write,

than mere lyrics, sayed

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Asmaa As-siddiq

a beautiful poem sayed a lil sad to read but very touching

congrats!

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Sayed Thangal

thanks so much Chris, you grasped the poem in the perfect sense ,

sayed

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Magdalena

A beautiful tender write Sayed with a touch of sadness. 

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Sayed Thangal

Thanks, you read the poem in detail, I believe.

with regards, sayed

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