MY DAYS ARE COUNTED

My days are counted
Oh, my son, the only son
Face wrinkled, memories vague
It's me, mother, your old mother.
Wished long, long ago, a little face to see
Days not passed without prayers
Blessed with you at last, in the old
Happiest, the memorable moments.
Earlier me, your Dad
Called by Him, the wound unhealed,
Closed his eyes, frozen,
Only three you be, in my lap.
Have I been a shadow to you
From dawn to dusk
Had I not tasted before you have
Snore at sleep, only then me to bed.
Not knew the span long time
Near to me come, for the legs ungrip
Hold my hands, just they tremble
Closer to me, eyes faded, gloomy.
Oh, dear son, the only son
My days are counted
Had I been to you all,
A little, just for me, before I leave.
sayed thangal
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ah lovely emotional write Sayed much enjoyed cheers x
Thanks so much Susan for your positive and creative response.
sayed
Yes, this is a sweet and sad poem! Poems are pieces of our soul,thanks for sharing yours!
Thanks dear Amber for your sharing
sayed
Feel as if i just read a powerful love story. :'( O:-)
I don't know how your imagination directed in such a way, thanks very much.
sayed
Ahh lovely write, well done. Full of emotion and love. Well done.
Hi Louise, you are welcome. you have read this poem with utmost care , I know.
thanks for your comment, sayed
Thanks Susan for your loving comment.
with regards, sayed
This is a very emotional write...your emotions are raw and exposed to the reader. Excellent! val
Hi Valerie, thanks for the encouragements, I like this type of emotional and mystic topic to write,
than mere lyrics, sayed
a beautiful poem sayed a lil sad to read but very touching
congrats!
Thanks Asma for your valuable words,
sayed
thanks so much Chris, you grasped the poem in the perfect sense ,
sayed
A beautiful tender write Sayed with a touch of sadness.
Thanks, you read the poem in detail, I believe.
with regards, sayed