~ MY EARTHLY TOPCOAT ~
{translucency & the third eye}

Awaken, the third eye,
Man's vestigial light organ,
And the universe
Will whisper her secrets...
Life does
The bravest test,
For there is true bravery
In growing older,
And a power in the magic
Of generations passing
(seemingly)
In the blink of an eye.
The true privilege
Is in being alive itself
And recognizing
The horizon's point of view,
Looped
In translucent circles
Connecting
The me and the you,
The past and the present,
Of all existence
To the inert
As well as the volcanic
Where,
The soul moves steadily forward
Helping to create
Worlds anew
With DNA
(human to alien)
Leaving other worlds behind
No dates nor persons,
No rituals or special standing,
The spirit
Recognizing the brilliance
Of the third eye,
Of and in
The light
That exists
Between,
All forms of life...
Oh sweet spirit
Awaken
The third eye,
Man's vestigial
Light organ,
For the universe is calling
In its most
Enigmatic voice...
And so,
I remove
My earthly topcoat,
And place it
(ever-so-gently)
Across its body,
Of ever evolving
Stars...
Tony Taylor
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Comments
Incredible write Tony. Great concept, intensely visual and with short powerful statements. Great description. I love the removing my earthly top coat line. Great ideas. Really enjoyed this ☀
Yay!!...so glad you enjoyed this SHELLEY!!....I spent a little longer on this one than normal....It has a LOT of underlying meaning to it.....and was so much fun to write.......Lots of Love to you and yours.......smiles.......T xo : )
Yes I agree with Shelley-anne I also love that line ‘removing my earthly top coat...sheer imaginary genius Sir Tony 💕💙💕
Thanx so much JILL!!....glad you were drawn to that line....it was the heart of the piece.......Love your insight dear poet sister!!......smiles......T xo : )
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Bravo Tony!!! Well done.
Thanx John!!....Peace Bro!!......smiles.....t xo ; )
Love the concluding verse, so very clever ending by taking the reader out of the work and into the stars. I find it similar to some of the short novels I used to read. Thrilling stuff! Your`s truly XD, the FISH.
Thanx FISH!!......I've always thought that the ending of the poem leads readers back to the beginning where they might want to understand what the poem is about in the first place......Endings are crucial to poetry as well as short stories!!........thanx again my friend......lots of love to you and yours!!.......peace bro!!........T xo ; )
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Thanx GREG!!......smiles.....T xo : )
I love this Tony! So imaginative! And I love the removing of top coat too as others commented. Defo taken this one to another level. It's a intuitive genius deep write and will need to read it again and again! Sssoo pinned! Px 💜💜💜
Hi Tony,
Great visual imagery,
well done,
Love,
Terry.
xoxo:)