My Fair-weather Love
For three years you stringed me along,
You made me believe that with you I could be strong
I brought to you my deepest of secrets,
But there was something I couldn't yet say.
The day before we talked of weddings
Not just one, but two!
So that both of our families could see the view
Of two lovers uniting from worlds apart
You said our love was so strong
surely nothing could tear us apart.
It was then that I knew or so I believed,
That telling you my pain would help put me at ease
I mustered the courage and wrote out the words
Of what happens when a girl drinks too much.
In a moment after, everything changed
I guess you couldn't bear the news
That your princess, your lover
She was just another broken soul,
And now I wake up every day alone
Wishing that I hadn't had so much faith in you.
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Hey JLYNN!!......what a powerfully compelling narrative piece!!..... and although it is a truly sad tale of a type of betrayal..... the melancholy, the sadness, is well conveyed!!..... and BEAUTIFULLY delivered!!.......ALL STARS!!..... well done dear poet sister!!...... and...... WELCOME to COSMO!!......LOVE and ROCKETS!!.....T xo ?ā³ā“ā?
I'm so glad that you liked it! I love that I get to share my words with such wonderful people.
Ps. GREAT PICTURE!!..... smiles ā“?
This is a heartbreaking piece of prose
Although there are too many of those
Yours stands out, as your writing shows
You did your feeling so well expose
Thank you for the sorrowful write
Thank you for reading mine, and I'm so happy you liked it!