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My first attempt at free verse

My first attempt at free verse

I know I rhyme all my ditties
but I cannot do free verse 
I guess I haven’t tried hard enough perhaps I need to rehearse

How an earth do I word one, I’m not at all sure... I really can’t help rhyming it’s all a trifle obscure
I like the words that sound alike but do not mean the same, to me it’s such good fun & becomes my little game

Okay let me see I will try my very best “I’m going to give myself a free verse .... test
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‘How sweetly sings the Skylark betwixt the wilderness of purple heather, one’s joy is magnified with an appreciation of immense pleasure’ 
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There I’ve had my first official go at creating a free verse
I wrote about the Skylark tho its not many lines so terse
Oh dear here I go again thinking everything in rhymes, I guess I cannot stop it, coz I do it all the time

 

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Tony Taylor

LOL!! LOL!!.....VERY clever stuff my fine feathered poetic friend.....ALL STARS!!..... keep at it!!...... it's working!!......thanx for the smiles!!.....T xo ?❤

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Jill Tait

Teehee just was stuck for thought as done a few today already :) but it’s a fact!!! I cannot pen ‘free verse’ & people seem to appreciate those more:( why oh why do I have to rhyme everything !!! 
But hey ho away I go..... again Tony Thanking you from bottom of me lil heart ❤️

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RRG (Rebecca)

Rhyming just seems natural lol. It happens automatically. This was a fun read. Blessings.

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Jill Tait

Teehee so you are just like.... me
both of us have to rhyme
it’s what we do best all of the time!!!

Thank you my friend cherie
you really mean allot to me❤️

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Jill Tait

Aww Thanks loads Rebecca & if I made you smile.... then my ditty was all worth while❤️

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FRANTIC FREE-VERSER

Hi Jill good attempt...
I'm a free-verser...or possibly a ranter!
I struggle to rhyme. 

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Jill Tait

Eeh well thank you I shall def try harder tho :) glad u enjoyed me ditty luv xx?

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A Lonely Journey

Awesome, Jill. 
I loved that. 
I rhyme everything, too! So don't be discouraged. I've tried and tried to write un-Suess like, but to no avail. Oh well. 
I like your sense of humor. 

Matthew. 

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Jill Tait

Awww I’m
just sat reading thru yours actually n luvin your sense of humour too :) Thanks loads ??

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A Lonely Journey

Thank you, Jill!! I'm sorry you had to endure my lunacy, but don't worry, you'll recover, or I can loan you a straight jacket. 
Matthew. 
 

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