Poem -

My first attempt at free verse

My first attempt at free verse

I know I rhyme all my ditties
but I cannot do free verseĀ 
I guess I haven’t tried hard enough perhaps I need to rehearse

How an earth do I word one, I’m not at all sure... I really can’t help rhyming it’s all a trifle obscure
I like the words that sound alike but do not mean the same, to me it’s such good fun & becomes my little game

Okay let me see I will try my very best ā€œI’m going to give myself a free verse .... test
Ā  Ā  Ā  Ā  Ā  Ā  Ā  ———————
ā€˜How sweetly sings the Skylark betwixt the wilderness of purple heather, one’s joy is magnified with an appreciation of immense pleasure’ 
Ā Ā  Ā  Ā  Ā  Ā  Ā  Ā  ——————
There I’ve had my first official go at creating a free verse
I wrote about the Skylark tho its not many lines so terse
Oh dear here I go again thinking everything in rhymes, I guess I cannot stop it, coz I do it all the time

Ā 

Like 4 Pin it 0
Support CosmoFunnel.com

Support CosmoFunnel.com

You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal.

Log in to leave a comment.

Comments

author
Tony Taylor

LOL!! LOL!!.....VERY clever stuffĀ my fine feathered poetic friend.....ALL STARS!!..... keep at it!!...... it's working!!......thanx for the smiles!!.....T xo ?ā¤

Reply
author
Jill Tait

Teehee just was stuck for thought as done a few today already :) but it’s a fact!!! I cannot pen ā€˜free verse’ & people seem to appreciate those more:( why oh why do I have to rhyme everything !!!Ā 
But hey ho away I go..... again Tony Thanking you from bottom of me lil heart ā¤ļø

Reply
author
RRG (Rebecca)

Rhyming just seems natural lol. It happens automatically. This was a fun read. Blessings.

Reply
author
Jill Tait

Teehee so you are just like.... me
both of us have to rhyme
it’s what we do best all of the time!!!

Thank you my friend cherie
you really mean allot to meā¤ļø

Reply
author
Jill Tait

Aww Thanks loads Rebecca & if I made you smile.... then my ditty was all worth whileā¤ļø

Reply
author
FRANTIC FREE-VERSER

Hi Jill good attempt...
I'm a free-verser...or possibly a ranter!
I struggle to rhyme.Ā 

Reply
author
Jill Tait

Eeh well thank you I shall def try harder tho :) glad u enjoyed me ditty luv xx?

Reply
author
A Lonely Journey

Awesome, Jill.Ā 
I loved that.Ā 
I rhyme everything, too! So don't be discouraged. I've tried and tried to write un-Suess like, but to no avail. Oh well.Ā 
I like your sense of humor.Ā 

Matthew.Ā 

Reply
author
Jill Tait

Awww I’m
just sat reading thru yours actually n luvin your sense of humour too :) Thanks loads ??

Reply
author
A Lonely Journey

Thank you, Jill!! I'm sorry you had to endure my lunacy, but don't worry, you'll recover, or I can loan you a straight jacket.Ā 
Matthew.Ā 
Ā 

Reply
author
Jill Tait

Teehee keep on laughin’ ??

Reply
Poem -

An English castle šŸ’™

An English castle šŸ’™

Up cobbled slopes stoney and steep, I am on the top turret of the coastline castle keep

I look at...

Poem -

Mother nature cried🄲

Mother nature cried🄲

The highest heavens opened up yon floodgates in the shrouded skies

As Mother nature sighed and...

Poem -

Me and my musicšŸ’•

Me and my musicšŸ’•

I am lying, loving listening to my favourite songs, from that local station on the radio

It’s just...

Latest poems in Freestyle, Narrative, Speculative, Verse

Poem -

Sometimes

Sometimes

Sometimes
I get so confused
I realize the best thing to do
is Nothing at all
...

Poem -

A Poet

A Poet

Let’s just cut to the chase please
none of you are poets
So obviously you can’t criticize me...

Poem -

YOU ASKED

YOU ASKED

Maybe, you already figured out the answer...

Congratulations!

For the ones who have flown...

Advertise on CosmoFunnel.com