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My first attempt at free verse

My first attempt at free verse

I know I rhyme all my ditties
but I cannot do free verseĀ 
I guess I havenā€™t tried hard enough perhaps I need to rehearse

How an earth do I word one, Iā€™m not at all sure... I really canā€™t help rhyming itā€™s all a trifle obscure
I like the words that sound alike but do not mean the same, to me itā€™s such good fun & becomes my little game

Okay let me see I will try my very best ā€œIā€™m going to give myself a free verse .... test
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ā€˜How sweetly sings the Skylark betwixt the wilderness of purple heather, oneā€™s joy is magnified with an appreciation of immense pleasureā€™Ā 
Ā Ā  Ā  Ā  Ā  Ā  Ā  Ā  ā€”ā€”ā€”ā€”ā€”ā€”
There Iā€™ve had my first official go at creating a free verse
I wrote about the Skylark tho its not many lines so terse
Oh dear here I go again thinking everything in rhymes, I guess I cannot stop it, coz I do it all the time

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Tony Taylor

LOL!! LOL!!.....VERY clever stuffĀ my fine feathered poetic friend.....ALL STARS!!..... keep at it!!...... it's working!!......thanx for the smiles!!.....T xo ?ā¤

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Jill Tait

Teehee just was stuck for thought as done a few today already :) but itā€™s a fact!!! I cannot pen ā€˜free verseā€™ & people seem to appreciate those more:( why oh why do I have to rhyme everything !!!Ā 
But hey ho away I go..... again Tony Thanking you from bottom of me lil heart ā¤ļø

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RRG (Rebecca)

Rhyming just seems natural lol. It happens automatically. This was a fun read. Blessings.

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Jill Tait

Teehee so you are just like.... me
both of us have to rhyme
itā€™s what we do best all of the time!!!

Thank you my friend cherie
you really mean allot to meā¤ļø

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Jill Tait

Aww Thanks loads Rebecca & if I made you smile.... then my ditty was all worth whileā¤ļø

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FRANTIC FREE-VERSER

Hi Jill good attempt...
I'm a free-verser...or possibly a ranter!
I struggle to rhyme.Ā 

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Jill Tait

Eeh well thank you I shall def try harder tho :) glad u enjoyed me ditty luv xx?

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A Lonely Journey

Awesome, Jill.Ā 
I loved that.Ā 
I rhyme everything, too! So don't be discouraged. I've tried and tried to write un-Suess like, but to no avail. Oh well.Ā 
I like your sense of humor.Ā 

Matthew.Ā 

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Jill Tait

Awww Iā€™m
just sat reading thru yours actually n luvin your sense of humour too :) Thanks loads ??

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A Lonely Journey

Thank you, Jill!! I'm sorry you had to endure my lunacy, but don't worry, you'll recover, or I can loan you a straight jacket.Ā 
Matthew.Ā 
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Jill Tait

Teehee keep on laughinā€™ ??

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