~ MY HEAVENLY BRIAR ROSE ~
I've known so little concerning the thorn
But think the thorn a chrysalis
Serene, feral, intractable
But as time does moult away its bite
One's eye and time does soon reveal
She, who was before, highly prized
As if a star were confined to womb
Within a heathered meadow's bloom
There, inconspicuously,
Has grown my Love
In a guarded garden's glow
Incubating,
My enigmatically perfect
Briar Rose...
Beautiful, must hang,
The gardens from whence she came
I wonder, where lays this loving oasis?
Oh, to wander there in secret silence
To dance through the land that stirs her blood
To bring her home, to witness her glow
Perpetuated,
By a homecoming befitting a queen
But,
With no pomp or circumstance
For none could dare or even compare
To the rarity of heart she holds
No song could attempt to expose
The triumph she creates inside of me
My Heavenly,
Briar Rose...
Tony Taylor
* a work in progress
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Awesome freeflowing poem
Thank you EDDIE!!.......ALWAYS a pleasure brother!!....... Hope all is well with you and yours!!....... your cyber-friend and admirer!!.......T xo?✴❤
wow what a great poem isn't great when the words come
rushing out like they do its like gift from god
YES!!... you're absolutely right GREG!!...... It IS great when the words just seem to come from everywhere........ makes me think I'm on the right path!!......thanx so much for this my friend!!.......Hugs-n-Smiles!!......T xo ?✴❤
Thank you SO VERY much for the PIN Sir LORRIS!!......it is ever-so much appreciated my friend!!......Lots of Love to you and yours!!.......smiles.....T xo ?✴❤
Tony,
What a gorgeous poem. So well written, and meaningful.
You have a fantastic muse, and your the words are beautifully crafted for her.
Tremendous write.
Matthew.
Hey THANX so much MATTHEW!!.....yes, this was particularly gratifying to write.......as it pertained to "My Muse" as you so aptly described it.......I wrote it with Cherie in mind....she sometimes inspires my writes as she so often unwittingly offers up "life-lessons" that affect me greatly....it is a blessing to have such kindness in one's life....especially when that kindness is of the unwitting kind......she is quite simply......a lady of great conviction and morality.......Thanx again L.J. .......stay groovy brother!!.......smiles.......T xo ?✴❤
Breath taking . I lost the air for the moment beneath my wings.
Shine like a star sweets.