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My Lady is More Than  a Poem

My Lady is More Than  a Poem

My lady is more than a poem
in the making,
she is something far greater
than that ..
She is a canvass, both shaded
and coloured,
yet hungry to have all her fine
details filled in ..
As a matter of fact, she is as
superbly crafted
and sound as the sleekest of
sea faring vessels by far ..
Yet without a shadow of doubt,
she is finer
than that even .. a keeper
to cherish, to respect and admire ..
Regardless, of distance or time ..

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Gwendoline

STUNNING Neville, truly a beauty to behold. I felt loves captivation here. An elegant write on the uplifting powers another persons beauty can bring to their admirer. Such a sweet and attentive write 
Gwen x

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Neville

.. I am magnificently honoured my lady G .. many &  I do mean many
huge thank you's ...................................... x

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Marion

What an absolute gift it is to be able to feel like that about someone so special...and equally a gift to be able to set it in words x

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Neville

thank you for indulging me Marion .. shall I post the cheque or do ya wanna collect ........................ N x

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Marion

Just blow it over the oceans Nev...it's sure to find it's way to me...set in in the direction of the steel works 😊

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Neville

is that what it is .. I just knew it was some kind of art .. steel works for me too .............................................. x

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Tony Taylor

Just Beautiful brother!!......Beautiful!!........T xo  : )

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Neville

hell, that'll do more than just nicely ..... cheers brother Tony .. thank you my friend .................... N :) 

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Jim "The Lad" ....

I'm sailing away! cool write Neville!...........................................Jim

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Neville

Wow, I am most grateful & mightily impressed Jim .. you are a man of many talents ... besides Rod Stewart, can you do anyone else .. N :)

ps .. all joking aside, I really am smiling here & thanks for stopping over ... Seasons Best to You & Yours ...................... Neville 

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