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Michael

A lovely poem and so romantic that it makes me want to feel your love as well as drown in the remorse of having to go through what you did.  Marvelous job.

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Valerie Lynn

Aww thank you Michael!!  Your comment brought a smile to my face. 

Val ♥

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Valerie Beasley...

Valerie!  A wonderful tribute to the "one"…full of love and your admiration.  What a wonderful romance you have described!  Wonderful write!

val

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Valerie Lynn

Thank you so much Val for the sweet comment!!!

Much Love!

Val ♥

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Anthony Lane

To have someone like this is a wonderful thing. Some live their whole life without knowing this kind of commitment! God bless you and yours!(we live close, I'm in Conroe!) Anthony

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Valerie Lynn

Thank you so much Anthony! What you said is so true and I feel truly blessed. You live like 20 minutes away from me! What a small world...

Much Love!

Val ♥

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Jimmy Arnold

"Wow" Val,

A wonderfully beauty of a poem and very heart felt, told story. Your truest of feelings, always to be poured into every line, every word and each moment you exhaled, each mentioning of your feelings in this poem, could be felt by your many readers ..Your poems, eclipse the one before, each time you present them to your readers...Wonderful job and fingers are always crossed for you and good to know, your rock still has the agility and passion, to continue to weather all storms and float unhindered, on calm as well as all stormy waters for you, as you do for him, (always)...

Your Friend,

Jim  

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Valerie Lynn

Jim - Thank you so much!! That was an incredibly sweet comment and I love it! You always make me smile and for that I thank you!

Love Always,

Val <3

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Carey Milton

Beautiful Val as I have previously read your profile this gave me tingles...I hope this love stays with you till the end and beyond xxxx Carey xxxx  

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Valerie Lynn

Aww Thank You Carey!!! You are so sweet! :)

Val <3

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Jason Luke

Awesome Val! Sweetest thing I could ever imagine. 

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Jai Masters

there are no words for romance 

only red roses, that's how you mk

me feel; Luv from Jai :)  

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Surabhi Saxena

Hey Valerie..

It was really Beautiful..! Loved it..!

Keep Writing..:)

Regards And Love

Surabhi
 

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Valerie Lynn

Surabhi - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem and leave me a comment! That was so very sweet of you!

Much Love!

Val <3

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