My Love is Lost at Sea

When I think of you at night
While I am sitting near the pond
Your beautiful face, it haunts me
Your hair mere sparkling blonde
I think of the promise you made me
In the earlier of years
One promise you said you would keep
Throughout the sorrow and the tears
You made that promise at night
While we were sitting on the sea
You said you would love me forever
And never stray away from me
But some promises are broken
Because some can never last
And this one in particular
Was broken clear and fast
We were sailing on a boat that evening
On the night you proudly proposed
But a storm hit us unexpectedly
And severe harsh weather arose
There was nothing we could do to stop it
Nothing to do or say
So we held each other tightly
To make sure we did not stray
But Mother Nature was stronger
Instead of two human beings at rest
She worked harder and harder to prove
She is the one and only best
She flung our boat into the water
While I struggled to the surface for breath
And searched for my love that I did not see
Trying to forestall my death
I did not see my love
I did not hear his call
I was searching for a man
That I loved most of all
Fifteen days passed by
After that tragic day
I received a call that morning
Telling me you are not here to stay
They said you died that night
Filling your lungs with death
The death is described as water
That ceased your one last breath
It feels like eons that passed by
Yet it has only been three years
It still feels like a long time
Through the sorrow and the tears
You broke that promise you made me
That dreadful, drastic night
But my love for you is endless
For you my heart shines alight
Like 0 Pin it 0
Support CosmoFunnel.com
You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal.
Comments
A promise broken too soon, that unfaithful sea, couldn't see your love to be.She must have been so jealous of that night.
Hello Casandra,
Gone but never to be forgotten and never to forget the promise we both made
and in a moment’s notice you were taken from me, a fairy tale turned nightmare.
A love forever to be sealed with promises, memories and tears ever after. You left me
but not of your own accord, I wonder at times, how could god have needed you more than I and did he not know the void that has been created,where once hope, promises and dreams of a better and brighter tomorrows and new life once dwelled Could he not have just borrowed you, just for a moment, to assist his bidding and returned you safe and sound, to the one whom you truly belonged? A better place in fact you are, but the other piece of your heart lies in dormant awaiting your return and until you do, in my window, I place this lit candle, as your guide, through the dark of night, to my heart back home and the door, forever left ajar and only shall it be shut,Is when you shut it, upon your arrival back home and then only will our hearts once again be complete, to continue to fulfill the promises we made, yours to me and mine to you, this was the way it was suppose to be...? Very sad but elegantly orchestrated dedicated poem ….Your services never to be gone,only temporarily on hold and I will wait for your return……
Kindest regards,
Jim
I'm feeling this.. Great piece!