Poem -
My Mind
My mind is as black as night
no thoughts awaken
no sounds speaking
you can't see the images of the text messages playing back and forth
You can't see the thoughts roaming around
My mind turned off all the feelings leaving me...
...helpless
all of my thoughts faded into the darkness
once was light
once was happy
my mind gave up
my heart sill beats
but breaks with each thump
I gave my all
but I can't regain control
the pain overtakens me
leaving me helpless
I have no hope of the sun shining
nor birds chriping
my mind is empty
no sound
no voice
no image
can be seen nor heard
my mind is black
empty
I feel alone...
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It is sad when we feel all alone. So many people on the planet, but they all have their own things going on and most don't stop to smell the roses in their own garden much less another. Good job, Anthony
It seems you have described the abyss. It is a place of darkness without resolution. What a place of desolation and sorrow! Your imagery is heavy with foreboding. Excellent write.
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Thanks so much, I wrote it when I was in a time of depression, thanks so much :D
-Bay