My pick up line

Hello, how have you been?
Looking as good as you must be a sin
Your long shiny hair and sparkly eyes,
Got me all shy and mesmerize
Your more beautiful than a rainbow,
and your presence has a glow
I have to know are you shy,
would you go out with a nice guy?
I wanna know all about you
Tell me everything you like to do  
Do you like sports and who's your team
Was I a thought or in your dream?
We can go for a walk and chat
Or go to dinner and get fat
As long as I'm with you, I'm good
All you have to say is, I would
Make me the happiest man alive
Say your be ready at five
Let's go out and have a good time
I promise to relax and unwind
Let's make a day turn to a week
True love is what I seek
Take that week and add fifty-one
And let that be a year done
Happy Anniversary! Aren't you glad you said yes?
How has it been? Did I pass the test??