Poem -
My Raven Came He Came a'Tapping
From my Raven Collection
My Raven came, he came a'tapping
on window pane
whilst I was napping
he came to me, to tell a truth
that I should not remain recluse
he told me there's a world outside
a life that's full and there's no strife
he told me I should rise from slumber
so I did, and now I wander
mind can see, mind can touch
seek the sun, I love so much
smell the roses red as cherries
collect in basket all the berries
found a truffle in the ground
touched the salt in ocean's mouth
next time I take a restless nap
I'll surely wait for Raven's
tap.
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Comments
Starting with truth/recluse
Every rhyme thereafter perfect
And the ending!
Thank you dear Rory, most humbled to share this collection with you, my friend. Its not my forte in rhyme so when it comes I post with pride. 🌹 Big hug to you.
My goddess! You almost make me wish I could rhyme like that 🤗. I will wait for the Raven's tap on our window, knowing that we have ravens living in the area. But, a croak is just as good to inspire🤣... Keep writing sequels🙏🙏🙏
I adore frogs too dear John, so glad you have enjoyed my rhyme, it's not something I often do, but when I do I get great satisfaction. Thank you. 🌹
I recently did a meditation on a guiding spirit who needed to get some energy from me in exchange for his help and - I am so sorry to say - he took the form of a stork so he got frogs from me and it helped me through a major busy last week at the office 😱 😂. That is why there are storks in my poem😂... Take care!
I love this so much I've pinned it. One because its a beautiful read and two because every one needs a tap on the shoulder sometimes. Hugs x
My dear Marion, I have missed you lovely friend, always lovely to see you, so glad you felt this, thank you. 🌹