Rising lies I surmise
Farewell fairytales
Ill will stricken
My mind is a signature blend
SurmountedÂ
Intact with distractionÂ
A census of sensesÂ
With senseless incentivesÂ
Hey JONATHAN!...I really like the poetic aspect of this..... the timing and rhythm of the beautifully chosen words that sing.... and truly come trippingly off of the tongue when read aloud!!......ALL STARS!!.... well done dear poet brother!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo : )
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REALITY ?
:)
What would you call it?Â
LIFE. :)
And, there's " romance "........with, poetry, too. :)
TRUE ?
Hey JONATHAN!...I really like the poetic aspect of this..... the timing and rhythm of the beautifully chosen words that sing.... and truly come trippingly off of the tongue when read aloud!!......ALL STARS!!.... well done dear poet brother!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo : )
Thanks Tony to kind