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My Spring Garden

My Spring Garden

*My Spring Garden*

When I arrived you were dead; Not a single weed, nor even a blade of grass
 
You wouldn't drink the water; It merely bypassed your dry loam, leaving you as parched as at midday 
 
I peeled back your superficial surface; not a snail, slug or worm, a few exoskeletons and nothing more
  
Words spoken over you were cruel: "She's toxic"; "Nothing grows there."
 
No one was prepared to invest; They said your fruit would be inedible, said your roses would be food for vermin
 
"You'll never see her beauty," they said; "Don't waste your time." There was talk of replacing you with "Good soil"
 
I'm sorry I didn't say anything; Just held back till the voices ceased, after years two or three 
 
Then the curse was broken. Gone the ones who'd cast their spell; It was time to turn you into a heaven, from a place so infertile
 
Organic bits and pieces joined you in their death; Composting close to your heart, with the help of easy-go guests: The worms took to you pretty quick
 
I covered you in another skin; that "good soil" was my gift.
The rain would kiss that extra layer, as though you were without sin
 
And hidden 'neath the shaddows Of over-hanging trees you mulled; soon adapted and along came birds and bugs
 
And grass and weeds appeared at last; It was a sign of life, a carpet of green that many called ugly. Yet, in truth you were miraculous!
 
Then, that special day; When I peeled things back again and saw your heart was ripe, under that cover love moved now: Biological delights!
 
So I selected a fine array--Of foliage, seed and stem; It were as though you had fell pregnant, with every kind of gem
 
And I watered you with tender care; My blessings they were over you, floating into the air above you, filled with anticipation
 
It's been 6 months; Oh look at you!
As colourful as a nation

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Tony Taylor

A truly beautiful narrative my friend........the anticipation is created perfectly......giving the reader a compelling wait that is fulfilled with great style at poems end......"As colorful as a nation"......Love it dear poet brother!!....also, I wanted to apologize to you for not getting back on an engaging comment of yours recently.....I will have to go back and find it!!.....I do so enjoy your work AL!!.....Be well!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo  :  )

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al Bikaadi

Thanks Tony! 
 
When I moved into this sharehouse 4 years ago, there was a guy who kept saying that the soil was toxic, bad, wouldn't grow anything. 
 
After he left. I saw grass there. 😱

True story!

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Marion

I like this write Al...especially because I have a love of nurturing and coaxing a garden to grow...it becomes a personal friend does it not... if allowed to flourish in the way it craves x

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