Poem -
My surrendered love
My loveย
Then I surrender to a fireย
And make a vow
Until sun riseย
And moon shineย
My love will be immortalย
Even I dieย
Am not worriedย
I will smile and carry a vow I made
With me to become aย light
And behind you a shadow
will walk with youย
Every step u makeย
My lord what wish i makeย
More than this and all I take
As a grant of your commandย
Therefore mankind will be aliveย
One day I will meetย
And we will seat
Next to this wonderful pondย
We have dreamtย
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I love your work. thank you for sharing your talent with Cosmos
Thank u Lisaย
" Surrendering love, is a big responsibility, you know !! " IT, goes way beyond mere physical manifestations of commitment. As well as personal pleasure, in another's company.ย
YOU must " respect love for what it is. "ย :) :) DO NOT FALL PREY TO MERE SELF-GRATIFICATION. Whilst enjoying life to the maximum with somebody else. Understand " promise " as well as HOPE. Understand what it means to " FORWARD PLAN " with a soul " in tune " with yours. Perhaps, for longer than a week !!!ย :) :) :)
SEE, the big picture and what matters in this world. In " LIFE " !! Or, some " thing " like IT, at the very least. BUILD DREAMS for a better future. A " future " away from tragedy, by accident or illness, best SHARED with a " like-minded " soul. Who gives to you as much as they take. " YOU SCRATCH MY BACK, I WILL SCRATCH YOURS " instantly comes to mind. Does, it not ?ย :) :) Look to progressive, rather than regressive, and, YOU, should do well, there. In relationship. In partnership. RIGHT ?ย Xย