~ MY TIME TO DIE ~
I wish to sleep, a long dark sleep
Where there has never been
Such a silence, devoid of violence
Haunted, by my every sin
Oh great creator, what is it in my nature
So depraved and deathly forlorn
That haunts my ugly sleep, where I fight to keep
The baby smell with which I was born
I need to dream, a most decrepit dream
In death's most mystical rest
Whose sinful fall, has divided us all
Into this troubled trespass
Where man's duality is woven by the seams
And sex is woven into its twist
Where innate ideas on procreation, pains my selfish aching
And my bid for God's congress.......bleeds
I wish to become the light, and shine on the other side
Where life becomes the dream
Where blood is quantum love, and thoughts cherubic doves
And nothing is as it seems,
Where we are understanding, and God does all the planning
So I can finally find that big sleep
Filled with blissfulness, without painfulness
Where all is precisely as it should be
With no need to cry, I wrap myself up
Ever so comfortably
Inside,
My time to die....
Tony Taylor
*final edit
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Oh my! This really is Β Β just amazing Tony! !! I'm blown away by this one! Big time!! You're talent is clear in all you write... but this... This touches every part of poetry I love, and goes deeper, brilliantly! Β I am struggling to put into word's how much I like this, can you tell? Lol!Β
Brilliant!
Brilliant!Β
Brilliant!Β
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WOW!! JOHN!!.... what an awesome comment!!.....I am so very pleased that it touched the way it has..... this is one of those writes that took three edits..... after I posted the first version... I stepped away from it for a few months and cam back to it with fresh eyes and finally in this, the third edit, I finally found what I was looking for.....I guess the process paid off!!..... thank you SO much for this my friend!!......I VERY much appreciate it!!....... Kings to you brother!!.... peace n stuff!!....T xo ?β΄β€
Awesome Tony! This seems a little different from you. I love content and flow to this piece.
- Syd xoΒ
Thank you SYD!!.....it's something I've been working on for some time..... finally got it right!!.....,thanx again!..... stay groovy bro!!......peace......T xo β€
Tony you don't need to die when you have greatest lady to be with man you lucky
to have her I would want live for now
Thank you GREG!!... for making me smile..... hugs n high fives!!.....T xo ?
I love this. Β You can capture a feeling that many of us feel! Β I adore this my brother!
Thank you Sir GREGORY!!.... and I adore you ..LOL!!.....you're awesome bro!!..... smiles!!.......T xo ?β΄β€
My Dear Tony,
Freedom from our sordid pasts, is not possible to do
The deeds we are ashamed of, and forever will we rue
The only way to our salvation, and having peace of mind
Is not up in the Heavens, but here on Earth to find
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For there are many that really love us, and relish being near
They worry about our departure, their loneliness they fear
We must find a way to block out, that which plagues our hearts and Souls
And turn our darkness into sunshine, the broken pieces again whole
Love,
Larry xxx
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My time to do...hey Tony I had visions of a victoriana drama in my head for some reason, it read like a classic novel...dear poet brother ?